Translated by rinruririn
Edited by mrwayne
QCed by derEX and Axalon

How can you say you love a girl if you won't strangle her?

Here's a new artist for ya! Well, new-ish, he's got 2 other untranslated stories (which I do intend to have translated eventually); this is his latest one. I love the artstyle he's got, reminds me of Houkago Play. Well, enjoy the crazy!

www.littlewhitebutterflies.net

Well I can't say I was looking forward to a comic about asphyxiation, but I was strangely disappointed that it didn't play more of a role in the story. I mean what's the point of bringing it up if you're not going to use it? Also, I wonder how couples IRL who are into this sort of stuff set boundaries... no point in establishing safewords if their partner can't speak them.
I like the girl's body type and even the quirky humor/expressions grew on me, but the drawing style is too sloppy to convey those rare moments of dark humor mixed with eroticism. Censorship is par for the course but needless to say, it doesn't help this comic's case.
What this story needed was sharper, more consistent artwork front-to-back. Even black bar censors used sparingly would help so much more to convey the twisted sexuality & sexual humor I think this artist/author was going for.

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Two words:

The fuck?!

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Well at least the title's fitting.

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Fan-fucking-tastic

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This dude is gonna have one legendary 'psycho ex' story.

If he survives.

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@mrwayne: I thought so too

@lord geryon: yeah, I can already see it, ".... and that's how I got this scar.", lol

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Never stick your dick in crazy, man. It never goes well.

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@lord geryon:

You're implying he's not going to put a ring and a choke chain on that crazy bitch.

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I bet she gives one of the best crazy bj's ever

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Art is intense
Story is intense

Thanks for the translation even if by rule of thumb you should never stick your dick in crazy

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Some of my old fetish resurfaced while I read this...

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Page 2 and 20 on the guy's face is my whole reaction for this story.

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i see this turning into a yandere story at one point...

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i don't know why i like this so much, i mean, i know im a maso, but only lightly.
but that stare of hers....

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My kind of woman.

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Hot and scary... now where is the sequel?

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I kinda hope there's no sequel to this.
Ever.
Never stick your dick in crazy.

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I wish there was more strangling

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Dude never stick your dick in crazy, and if on the off chance you do, immediately get up, wipe your dick off, pull your pants up, then turn around and GET THE FUCK OUT!

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I find this adorable in some crazy yandere way. Is that so wrong?

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O.O

Bitch is Crazy.

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Very interesting story, I hope the author would draw a sequel.

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Fuck now talk later!

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I fear no man, but that "thing" .... It scares me.

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he needs to teach her the meaning of love...with his dick!

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Page 9: If you're just thinking that NOW, you haven't been paying attention...

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It seems the moral of the story is this (especially after reading all the comments): Don't stick your cock in crazy, it never ends well.

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Darn. At the top of page 16, it looked like he was going to grab her neck and stranglefuck her, thus making her and me very happy. Instead he settled for just boring old anal.
She was an interesting and sexy character, hopefully we'll see more like this from this artist in the future.

Upon closer inspection, it looks like there's tiny skeletal fingers around her neck on page 19. Maybe it's just my imagination, or maybe the artist originally planned for more throat action and then took it out for some reason. Oh well.

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stick dick in crazy...
dont stick dick in crazy...
stick dick in crazy...
dont stick dick in crazy...
stick dick in crazy...
dont stick dick in crazy...

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All i need is a sequel and my life will be complete.

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Holy shit, this guy could write horror manga.

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I can see this becoming a series with the last chapter having her finally say she loves him.

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The road to Hell is paved with Good Intentions... no doubt my friend.

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I have a feeling that the guy will be corrupted with weird fetish, rather than the girl being "cured" and understanding "love"

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Love her face in the second page.

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Lets be honest, this chick is a bit... out there. But we'd all hit that given the opportunity

Last edited on 06 November 2015, 04:16.

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umm why yandere?

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@penislord
"the drawing style is too sloppy to convey those rare moments of dark humor mixed with eroticism"
There's no mechanical justification for that statement.
If you just don't like the art that's fine, don't put on airs like there was some sort of objective failure to portray this particular kind of story unless you've actually put thought into what that means.

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Lol, cynical and great one. Like it a lot.

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But why is she listed as yandere? She is not yandere - she's just twisted nymphomaniac whore! Yandere requires love bordering on insanity, and she just wants to fuck someone, no matter who. That's not yandere by any definition of that term!

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@penislord1
non-verbal safe words

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