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[Brandon Shane] The Monster Under the Bed [Ongoing]

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Posted:2014-12-15 13:51
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[Brandon Shane] The Monster Under the Bed [Ongoing], added 2018-12-17 23:32
[Brandon Shane] The Monster Under the Bed [Ongoing], added 2019-01-06 05:12
[Brandon Shane] The Monster Under the Bed [Ongoing], added 2019-01-14 03:25
[Brandon Shane] The Monster Under the Bed [Ongoing], added 2019-01-20 22:30
[Brandon Shane] The Monster Under the Bed [Ongoing], added 2019-01-28 00:23
[Brandon Shane] The Monster Under the Bed [Ongoing], added 2019-02-03 13:29
[Brandon Shane] The Monster Under the Bed [Ongoing], added 2019-02-11 01:17
[Brandon Shane] The Monster Under the Bed [Ongoing], added 2019-02-17 05:16
[Brandon Shane] The Monster Under the Bed [Ongoing], added 2019-02-24 12:59
[Brandon Shane] The Monster Under the Bed [Ongoing], added 2019-03-03 12:47
[Brandon Shane] The Monster Under the Bed [Ongoing], added 2019-03-11 02:02
[Brandon Shane] The Monster Under the Bed [Ongoing], added 2019-03-18 01:19
[Brandon Shane] The Monster Under the Bed [Ongoing], added 2019-03-25 12:11
[Brandon Shane] The Monster Under the Bed [Ongoing], added 2019-03-31 12:19
[Brandon Shane] The Monster Under the Bed [Ongoing], added 2019-04-08 02:39
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[Brandon Shane] The Monster Under the Bed [Ongoing], added 2019-06-01 21:38
[Brandon Shane] The Monster Under the Bed [Ongoing], added 2019-06-16 12:00
[Brandon Shane] The Monster Under the Bed [Ongoing], added 2019-06-24 12:36
[Brandon Shane] The Monster Under the Bed [Ongoing], added 2019-07-15 03:07
[Brandon Shane] The Monster Under the Bed [Ongoing], added 2019-07-22 00:43
[Brandon Shane] The Monster Under the Bed [Ongoing], added 2019-08-04 12:23
[Brandon Shane] The Monster Under the Bed [Ongoing], added 2019-08-11 11:56
[Brandon Shane] The Monster Under the Bed [Ongoing], added 2019-08-18 12:54
[Brandon Shane] The Monster Under the Bed [Ongoing], added 2019-08-27 01:35
[Brandon Shane] The Monster Under the Bed [Ongoing], added 2019-09-08 03:57
[Brandon Shane] The Monster Under the Bed [Ongoing], added 2019-09-16 02:28
[Brandon Shane] The Monster Under the Bed [Ongoing], added 2019-09-30 00:03
[Brandon Shane] The Monster Under the Bed [Ongoing], added 2019-10-06 18:47
[Brandon Shane] The Monster Under the Bed [Ongoing], added 2019-10-21 01:41
[Brandon Shane] The Monster Under the Bed [Ongoing], added 2019-11-03 02:21
[Brandon Shane] The Monster Under the Bed [Ongoing], added 2019-11-12 22:49
[Brandon Shane] The Monster Under the Bed [Ongoing], added 2019-11-26 20:26
[Brandon Shane] The Monster Under the Bed [Ongoing], added 2019-12-09 04:42
[Brandon Shane] The Monster Under the Bed [Ongoing], added 2019-12-16 00:19
[Brandon Shane] The Monster Under the Bed [Ongoing], added 2020-01-05 14:29
[Brandon Shane] The Monster Under the Bed [Ongoing], added 2020-01-19 14:40
[Brandon Shane] The Monster Under the Bed [Ongoing], added 2020-01-26 19:14
[Brandon Shane] The Monster Under the Bed [Ongoing], added 2020-02-09 17:51
[Brandon Shane] The Monster Under the Bed [Ongoing], added 2020-03-05 03:52
[Brandon Shane] The Monster Under the Bed [Ongoing], added 2020-03-15 20:02
[Brandon Shane] The Monster Under the Bed [Ongoing], added 2020-03-29 20:04
[Brandon Shane] The Monster Under the Bed [Ongoing], added 2020-04-19 21:33
[Brandon Shane] The Monster Under the Bed [Ongoing], added 2020-05-03 21:56
[Brandon Shane] The Monster Under the Bed [Ongoing], added 2020-05-17 23:57
[Brandon Shane] The Monster Under the Bed [Ongoing], added 2020-05-31 02:45
[Brandon Shane] The Monster Under the Bed [Ongoing], added 2020-06-15 14:23
[Brandon Shane] The Monster Under the Bed [Ongoing], added 2020-06-28 13:36
[Brandon Shane] The Monster Under the Bed [Ongoing], added 2020-07-12 21:22
[Brandon Shane] The Monster Under the Bed [Ongoing], added 2020-07-27 13:18
[Brandon Shane] The Monster Under the Bed [Ongoing], added 2020-08-09 18:26

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Posted on 24 November 2014, 21:25 by:   animanera89    PM
Score +815
interesting. I'll keep an eye on this comic. Seems good
Posted on 24 November 2014, 21:56 by:   test12932930    PM
Score +121
potential with practice. 'oh tim' - can't help but hear chris lilley
Posted on 25 November 2014, 00:07 by:   Lord.lukas    PM
Score +244
I'm hooked need more
picture of her on pg13 is cute
Last edited on 19 January 2015, 00:50.
Posted on 25 November 2014, 06:42 by:   IronBanshee    PM
Score +229
Hm, this looks good. Must watch for updates!
Posted on 25 November 2014, 21:00 by:   Gaara29    PM
Score +205
Looks great. Looking forward to more.
Posted on 25 November 2014, 21:33 by:   Pedrobeartimon    PM
Score +348
You have my attention...
Posted on 06 December 2014, 18:18 by:   Perfesser Bear    PM
Score +264
Y'okay; cute demon girl + hot Mom = watchable funnies pages!
Posted on 06 December 2014, 18:33 by:   Haborym    PM
Score +318
Yknow, I'm a weeb, but I like western art too. Some of it is shit but some Japanese art is shit too. Does not mean it all is.

That being said, I really do wish there was more of this. It seems kinda amusing. Cute little monster girl and some normal human boy having this kind of a relationship.
Posted on 08 December 2014, 17:06 by:   knucklesluigi    PM
Score +100
I don't get it why is he grounded. My socks used to go missing when I was with my mom, but she didn't ground me for it.
Posted on 08 December 2014, 17:48 by:   imercenary    PM
Score +630
"You're missing socks! You're grounded!"

What?
Posted on 10 December 2014, 21:56 by:   JiveGuru    PM
Score +1148
All of his socks have disappeared without a trace (except a single remaining pair) since last laundry day, naturally his mom would be looking for answers. A good grounding could get to the bottom of it one way or the other, whatever her suspicions. Also, no, she doesn't think he's jerking off into them.

I should know. I'm the guy who draws and writes this comic.

It's a bit silly yes, but then again it's a means to an end. Just go with it.
Posted on 16 December 2014, 09:18 by:   kingwolf    PM
Score +543
"I'm friends(with benefits) with the monster that's under my bed"

Edit: I don't even care about the sex anymore. I'm just really enjoying their dialogue with each other.
Last edited on 09 March 2015, 08:26.
Posted on 02 January 2015, 06:32 by:   SurpriseAnon    PM
Score +150
Tim's mom has got it going on.
Posted on 12 January 2015, 16:05 by:   SurpriseAnon    PM
Score +100
>page 11

I say again:

Got it.

Going.

On.
Posted on 12 January 2015, 22:28 by:   JiveGuru    PM
Score +481
Slow?! I'm just one man with a day job. I'm sorry.

<.<

Nah, no I'm not.
Posted on 18 January 2015, 17:30 by:   JiveGuru    PM
Score +110
I'd just like to point out that the newest page '#12 Proof' has a slightly more updated version now. I forgot to add in a small detail, which has since been corrected. If you wanna update, feel free, or not.
Posted on 27 January 2015, 22:27 by:   JiveGuru    PM
Score +206
Just one more heads up, but I've made a slight change to page 5 'Grounded' by adding in a [10 years ago] box, since some folks seem to have trouble figuring out that there's a time jump, and it causes... problems.

Therefore, the change.

Feel free to update that whenever.
Posted on 04 February 2015, 15:55 by:   gauron    PM
Score +110
Just to make my days easier so next time i dont have to retype it again:

http://themonsterunderthebed.net/
Posted on 09 February 2015, 10:58 by:   Saint Jimmy    PM
Score +172
He could have just hid his socks under a blanket. Everyone knows that blankets are like force fields to monsters!
Posted on 22 February 2015, 23:49 by:   JiveGuru    PM
Score +110
“The kid in this looks like such an asshole.”

Haha, this made my day!

”Will someone please tell the author to stop using Bevel and Emboss? That effect's value bottomed out with the release of Photoshop 8.”

Sorry you don't enjoy my text effects. I'll make sure everything is in flat times new roman for you from now on. °~°
Last edited on 23 February 2015, 00:08.
Posted on 24 March 2015, 15:30 by:   Paizurikin    PM
Score +192
Comic Homepage: http://themonsterunderthebed.net/

Artist links
Deviantart: http://jiveguru.deviantart.com/
Furaffinity: http://www.furaffinity.net/user/jiveguru/
Hentai-Foundry: http://www.hentai-foundry.com/user/JiveGuru/profile/
InkBunny: https://inkbunny.net/JiveGuru
Tumblr: http://jiveguru.tumblr.com/
Posted on 12 April 2015, 22:26 by:   JiveGuru    PM
Score +83
It's just a name, it's not supposed to be overly dramatic or anything. Yes, I know, it's not even that original.

But it works!
Posted on 13 April 2015, 22:03 by:   JiveGuru    PM
Score +290
Who is 'We'?

It's just me working on it alone, and once you guys get over your shattered expectations of some grand exotic name, I think you'll grow to like it. I never once had any complaints about her name before back when I wrote the original story and that's been out for 3 years now.
Posted on 22 May 2015, 19:24 by:   JiveGuru    PM
Score +83
Ahhh! He wasn't bothered by the idea of chasing the rats though, he just needed proof they (or something) existed. Therefore, he was always a full-blown smooth macho guy. XD
Posted on 07 June 2015, 17:10 by:   JiveGuru    PM
Score +108
You forgot page 32! XD
Posted on 09 July 2015, 19:11 by:   12345combination    PM
Score +1038
*page 5*
Give her the dick.

*page 10*
Give her the dick!

*page 20*
Give Her The Dick!

*page 30*
GIVE HER THE DICK!

*page 37*
WHY AREN'T YOU GIVING HER THE DICK!?

*page 46*
YOU COULD'VE GIVEN THEM BOTH THE DICK!
Last edited on 31 August 2015, 08:16.
Posted on 01 October 2015, 01:06 by:   JiveGuru    PM
Score +103
"It's maaaaaagic!”

-Brandon

Hah... that was fast! XD
Last edited on 04 October 2015, 05:02.
Posted on 15 November 2015, 18:07 by:   JiveGuru    PM
Score +163
@Vodhr

First of all, yes, Tim is 18... Only during the first 3 pages, and a few near the end of chapter 1. This is the FRAMING STORY, where he is telling us about the events that occurred 10 years ago, leading to his current life where he has a monster girlfriend. During the remainder of the comic (which is all a flashback!) Tim is 8 years old and you'll be happy to notice that there is no sex or any other funny business involving either him or Shadow during this time. Ruth and Thomas fill this role as they are adults.

I write a story about monsters, I am not a monster myself, thank you.

The 'She doesn't think he's wanking off in his socks' comment was in response to another person's comment here suggesting that Ruth DID think that was what he was doing. That original comment has since been down-voted into oblivion. He is grounded because almost all of his socks have vanished without a trace mysteriously. His mother thinks he has done something with them, and thus grounds him. Is it heavy-handed? Yes. This isn't exactly based on reality here. It's a cartoon.
Posted on 06 January 2016, 05:37 by:   JiveGuru    PM
Score +101
Haha, if you guys think THIS is all of the plot then you're in for a surprise. We haven't even gotten to the juicy bit yet.
Posted on 29 May 2016, 14:35 by:   truefire    PM
Score +93
pg85: Honestly, for a boy who's had a phobia of girls and a girl from a species that doesn't kiss to show affection, that's about as well as you'd expect their first kiss to go.
Posted on 22 August 2016, 00:54 by:   kluesner    PM
Score +111
Okay calling it now. The Yellow Monster is the boys mother. I mean Hot, Blond, and the same Mole on the side of her mouth. Plus the fact she know what our young redhead is going threw.
Posted on 16 December 2016, 00:26 by:   VirusWar    PM
Score +154
I'm supposed to fap here, not read a love story about a monster and a kid!
BUT ITS SO CUUUTE D:
...shut up, dick
Posted on 06 February 2017, 01:19 by:   krautbernd    PM
Score +173
So his mom is Blackheart, right?
Posted on 02 June 2017, 00:09 by:   JiveGuru    PM
Score +129
I don't believe I've ever promised anybody anything.
I've only clarified to the horny masses that there will be sex in it *eventually* since they keep whining about it all the time. I wonder sometimes what will happen when the day finally comes, and the sex happens, and then the story keeps going afterwards because that wasn't the climax of the story, or even the focus.

Once again, it's not a sex comic. It's a comic wherein the characters just happen to have sex sometimes via natural progression.
Posted on 25 June 2017, 05:35 by:   Z-Byte    PM
Score +232
@JiveGuru I think a lot of the salt coming from the people thinking this was a porn comic was that the first few pages pretty heavily hinted at erotic content. Kicking a story off with a literally veiled sex scene makes people expect sex to happen, if not regularly then at least with more teasing content. You can't blame anyone for thinking this was going to have more porn in it when it started off with softcore before the story even got involved. If you didn't have that bit in the beginning, then there wouldn't be any real expectation of erotic content and it'd be a lot easier to expect the flow of a natural, budding relationship. Remove that prologue entirely and I'd reason that people would be mostly surprised to see sex come into the story for more than a idle touch here and there.

Of course, you'd also have fewer readers, especially on this site ("Hentai" isn't Japanese for "Art"). Might be worth it, though, if you're seeing some of your audience as "whiners" for this.

But yeah, just a bit of Story Writing 101 for you: make sure, if you use a prologue, it sets the tone you're looking to pace the story the way you want to with, otherwise you'll get some of your readers thinking you sold them a bill of goods, ESPECIALLY when sex is involved.
Posted on 13 November 2017, 01:19 by:   JiveGuru    PM
Score +80
Updated already?! Whoever you are, you must really like me! :D
Posted on 13 November 2017, 01:54 by:   dougch    PM
Score +145
Oh my god TITS! Finally! i have been waiting. 3 long years for some tits!
Posted on 14 November 2017, 00:20 by:   JiveGuru    PM
Score +95
But but buuuut.... the comic has had Tits in it several times before?! And how could you have waited 3 years for them? The comic isn't even that old yet.... for another 2 days anyway.
Posted on 14 March 2018, 21:03 by:   JiveGuru    PM
Score +107
It's not ending, it's just coming up to the end of Chapter 3, that's all. It's only another quick check in with the slowly ongoing present time event.
Posted on 21 March 2018, 07:57 by:   johann2126    PM
Score +188
I for one, despite being a horny, sexually twisted fuck, enjoy this very much and very much appreciate all the hard work the author has put in to this story.
Posted on 09 July 2018, 01:51 by:   JiveGuru    PM
Score +97
Just so you know, the comic is back again!
Posted on 06 August 2018, 22:42 by:   JiveGuru    PM
Score +95
@Jayman52 No, he's realizing that Marcy is implying she wants to do more than just study, tonight, when she shows up at his house.
Posted on 02 December 2018, 11:16 by:   ragnarockin7    PM
Score +166
This whole "Marcy arc" seems pointless. She wasn't in the original story, and I'll put Shadow far above your typical dumb blonde (the fact that she has a Rush poster on her wall elevates her even further).
Posted on 03 December 2018, 22:25 by:   lonewanderer101    PM
Score +173
Timothy!!!!!! You made Shadow cry!!!

NO WAIFU FOR YOU!!!
Posted on 08 August 2019, 02:28 by:   danund81    PM
Score +193
Who the bloody hell has scissors INSCRIBED WITH THEIR NAME.
Posted on 09 February 2020, 22:00 by:   Jarvis_42    PM
Score +79
Quick! put Tims name on the dagger!
Posted on 12 August 2020, 00:10 by:   Daneasaur    PM
Score -31
@AhumanRSScore
Who's yelling about NSFW content? if you mean me, I am merely saying how it's stupid that the story has pulled away from our main characters and is about all this ritual bullshit and backstabbing and stuff that doesn't involve them. I'm not pissed that there isn't more fucking, I'm pissed that the characters this story claimed to be focusing on are basically being ignored in favor of a plot no one gives a shit about.
Posted on 08 September 2020, 19:51 by:   AhumanRS    PM
Score -14
"no one gives a shit about."
Complete disregard for the 2000 ratings holding an average of 4.5 stars. Your opinion does not coincide with all, nor does it emulate the popular opinion. At least acknowledge those who *do* give a shit.
At the end of the day, it's the artist's work. They do as they please.
Posted on 13 September 2020, 21:40 by:   Jarvis_42    PM
Score +15
A young romance across two worlds, and you think the larger plots of both worlds wont eventually hinge on their actions? You must be new to the genre.
Theres also two more pages on the actual website that arent uploaded here yet.
Posted on 08 December 2020, 15:59 by:   fogpet    PM
Score +28
It's about to turn 2021 and they still only kissed once as kids? The plot has interesting elements going on but... well whatever, I'll see you boys in two years for the next chapter.
Posted on 15 January 2021, 21:46 by:   Norafin    PM
Score +69
This uploader apparently passed away in summer, so no updates will happen.
https://e-hentai.org/g/1823014/24d5cc0f37/ is a new and updating upload of this comic.
Posted on 19 March 2023, 00:54 by:   smullville    PM
Score +6
Does anyone think this story has gone off the rails? It is like the author forgot about the very first page of the comic. In fact, it almost looks like the characters are older than they were when they had sex.

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