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Why?

Base +5, omegaphlare +8

A lot better than those that tarnished rewriting from the start, like EZrewriter and Olddog51.
I like how some of the other stories have some confused on whether it's a translation or a rewrite. It means Lewdatron is getting better at it.

Base +6, hyl -25, southrim +22, Hyoros +7

Isn't someone going to ban this shitcock? All he does it repost someone else's CG images to promote his own shitty writing. And just look at EVERY GODDAMN POST - it's the same 2-3 images over and over in every 'story' even.

It's not original art, it's not *his* art, and it's not even unique and different art.

Base +1, AyeSpy +4, shinangels +18, pond39267 +6, Hyoros -7

It's game CG from here with a made up fanfic attached as images.
https://e-hentai.org/g/614344/d0601f9c17/?p=17

Base +8, tehftw +6

after the first few of these, I thought it was great because all of the stories are just copypasta typical hentai ridiculous and unrealistic dialogue that you see in 95% of all hentai and I thought lewdatron was making them ironically to poke fun at how you can have zero knowledge of the japanese language and still have a 90% accurate translation.

Then more and more of these started to come out and now I realized that he was actually making them unironically.

Base +26, nightmasterx +3, hjhj210 +10, hjugodf +6, rediov +5

i think this CG doesn't base on the eroge's original story after all (?)

. . . . . *feels disappointed*

Base +6

Eh it's one thing if this was a fanfic based off of the real story, but this is just some random words put onto an existing CG set.

Base +6

The only disgusting stupid thing about this is that lewdatron writes better stories then the vast amount of garbage on this site.... which is just plain fucking sad that and the dumbass halfwits who don't like rewrites for no fucking reason..... more so when every now and again on this site the rewrite is better then the actual trashy story -_-

anyway this ain't bad kudos for the effort put into it I say

Base +13, shield_dust +1, Hyoros +7, LesbianYuriLover +4