Holy shit someone actually translated a Black thunder work, wow. Thanks.

Edit: Wait... is this a rewrite? I don't know Japanese, so I can't tell... it looks like a rewrite though.

Edit @AfroThunda: Aw, that sucks. I was hoping for a proper translation, not this rewrite shit

Last edited on 30 November 2014, 03:03.

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I just compared this to the raw and i'm pretty sure it's a rewrite.

Base +9, FO-Bakayarou +7

Can confirm rewrite. From top to bottom. It's all rewritten, and it's incomplete.

https://e-hentai.org/g/629695/d994e7f18f/

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A thousand deaths into Oblivion for posting rewrites.

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WHY DO PEOPLE DO REWRITE!? JUST BLOODY TRANSLATE THIS SHIT. WHY IS IT SO MUCH TO ASK FOR?

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Cause it's bloody easy to rewrite.

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this is the reason why i miss goatse.better rough/machine translation than rewritte

Base +6, Azura Meta +6, Imsolo -6

You know, this would be great on its own. Why does it have to be a rewrite?

Base +6, sonnytag123 +7, Imsolo +6

still good

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