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[Chuuka Naruto] Reijou Maiko ~Kyuuke no Hien~ | Daughter Maiko Old Family Secret Banquet Ch. 1-2 [English] [Jellyboy]

[中華なると] 令嬢麻衣子~旧家の秘宴~ 第1-2話 [英訳]

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Posted:2014-11-28 10:37
Parent:761692
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Language:English  TR
File Size:22.74 MiB
Length:44 pages
Favorited:265 times
Rating:
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Average: 4.46

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Posted on 28 November 2014, 10:37 by:   animebests9    PM
Uploader Comment
HI.

Daughter Maiko Family secret Banquet. Reijyou Maiko Kyuuke No Hien.
This is my first time translating to English. My Japanese is a bit rusty.
If you want me to translate more Daughter Maiko Family Secret Banquet.
Let me know. otherwise, I will do something else.
Posted on 24 November 2014, 23:07 by:   wavedash    PM
Score +132
poor grammar

6: "And they succeed in business, and make a fortune" - Should be past tense by context
6: "the land is filled with trees and mountain" - Should be "a mountain" or "mountains" for parallelism
6: "It's is the month of February"
6: "the year of the Snake" - Not a proper noun. "The Year of the Snake" might be acceptable.
6: "Etomutsu Mamuji 71 years old" - Needs a verb or comma
6: "it has been awhile" - Probably should be "a while"
7: "I see some strange face too" - "Some" is plural, "face" is singular
7: "Etomutsu Tatsuo ." - Why is that space there
7: "It's Ok" - It's spelled either "okay" or "OK".
7: "She is a college student and the grandchildren" - That ain't right
7: "she belong to Etomutsu's house" - Agreement
7: "She is the daughter of the Second son" - Not a proper noun.
7: "she feel the same" - Agreement

I don't know how rusty your Japanese is, but your English rust is definitely showing.
Posted on 24 November 2014, 23:58 by:   animebests9    PM
Score +101
It would be nice if someone edit the grammar. Any volunteer?. It's a hobby... fans for fans, so don't expect too much.
Posted on 25 November 2014, 01:46 by:   x0run    PM
Score +46
It would be great if you did more!
Posted on 25 November 2014, 02:38 by:   Red of EHCOVE    PM
Score +112
Join our forums and ask for proofreading help. You can use the bounty system to recruit proofreaders and editors!
Posted on 25 November 2014, 05:32 by:   diehard90    PM
Score -32
Anyone have the RAW link?
Posted on 25 November 2014, 07:19 by:   JackMorrison    PM
Score +46
I'm glad that you've uploaded a Chuuka Naruto work. And thank you for being honest about your proofreading. Your just a beginner.
Posted on 25 November 2014, 07:31 by:   animebests9    PM
Score +77
Hi, I will start to do chapter 2. Anyway volunteer for grammar check. This is fans for fans. So NO money. Also check grammar for chapter 1 too. Just message me if u want to do it. Thank
Posted on 25 November 2014, 14:49 by:   ncc1701z    PM
Score +13
@animebests9
Learn about the bounty system before you conclude that it involves real money.
Posted on 26 November 2014, 10:56 by:   1990incubus    PM
Score +49
@animebests9
thanks for translating
Posted on 27 November 2014, 20:26 by:   animebests9    PM
Score +47
Hi, just uploaded chapter 2. It was quick and dirty translation. Anyway, enjoy!!!

If I uploaded the same file name, what would happen. Will it over write the old files, or the system will rename to a new file.
Posted on 27 November 2014, 23:06 by:   D-mon    PM
Score +40
Thank you very much.

There isn't a gallery of the original version of this manga on the site, and there's only the magazine volume with the last chapter (Spoilers obviously: https://e-hentai.org/g/625429/3e59b30150/ )

Could you create the gallery with the raw you're using?
Posted on 28 November 2014, 12:37 by:   Ficfactor    PM
Score +52
I love Chuuka Naruto, so I'm always happy to see more.

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