seconed time translating hope u like it.

Dude, please use different font.There are plenty of guides how to edit/typeset manga & doujinshi, including those on forums here

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while this got no editing at all, hot damn i'm waiting for this, thank you very much!

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language:poor grammar

4: "It 's hypnosis time." - No spaces in contracted words
5: "It would seems" - subject verb agreement
5: "u" - Misspelling
5: "has affected u Patchouli" - Missing comma
5: "i" - Capitalize the pronoun "I"
5: "it seems like I was wrong there is no one here" - Run-on sentence
5: "u" - Misspelling
5: "i'm" - Capitalize the pronoun "I"
6: "i'm" - Capitalize the pronoun "I"
6: "u" - Misspelling
6: "i" - Capitalize the pronoun "I"

Holy crap. God-awful editing, god-awful grammar, I can only assume the quality of the translation matches.

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This is translated from the spanish version, right? Because the 3rd panel of page 19 is still in jap.

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TIL "Poor Grammar" is an ACTUAL Tag.

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Please stop doing this

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a bit pain to read, but now I get the idea what's going on thanks tho

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I... uh... what? Is this really what you'd called translated?

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Holy fuck, i thought this "translation" was a joke. Grammar, do you know it?
and to answer your question, "viniendote", or the basic verb "venirse", means "cumming".

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While it is clear the translator did not have some quality control on his thing, atleast... we understand it?

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So I've had a proper translation of this done for about a month but I continued to put off finishing it because I absolutely hate how nerve racking type setting is. Anyways, seeing this abomination has put me into action and you guys can expect me to release a decent version of this Doujin within the next few days. I can't promise the type setting will be perfect, but it will use a good font and be miles ahead of this crap.

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thank you very much! been waiting for this to be translated

@gorem ,You said you could do better then this but nothing to offer.
You are just a hypocrite only know how to complaint about others peoples work which still being contributed to the community .

Last edited on 20 November 2014, 03:16.

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@Gorem
You could always try making a bounty. It might take a while for someone to pick it up, but there's plenty of skilled and willing editors out there.

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Dude, did you edit/translate this with your FEET!?
Holy cow just when i thought nobody could beat me at "half-assing" stuff, you show up.

That, or this is some serious medium-to-high-level trolling...
(In that case: well played sir/ma'am)

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So this was translated to English, from a Spanish version, but the grammar here is sorta shoddy. Good thing I read comments. Since I know Spanish just as well as English, off I go then!

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Estoy impresionada contigo

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Gorem: Thank you. I can't say it enough. THANK YOU.

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I'm usually pretty lenient when it comes to grammar and stuff because a lot of people weren't born in Englo country but still they want to traduce stuff, so it's alright

But it doesn't even look like you gave a damn about anything
It's nice of you to translate but for the love of god try harder next time

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@gorem

I can typeset this for you if you'd like. I sent you a PM on the main forum, so check there for more info.

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I was waiting for this for a long time. Thanks dude. I think you did great.

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I was ready to fap but I lost it at the third page and laughed at how bad this was translated. This doujin deserves a better translator.

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Could you please translate this one? https://e-hentai.org/g/697661/cff4aaff31/
Pleeease?

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It's pretty rough around the edges. I think you should get an editor/proofreader or something.

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http://www.doujinshi.org/book/667640/Saimin-Rape-Patchouli-Knowledge/
RAW: https://e-hentai.org/g/669383/af25be204c/
Better English Translation: https://e-hentai.org/g/759379/1b304a7d86/
Spanish Translation: https://e-hentai.org/g/707493/65d035ea31/
Korean Translation: https://e-hentai.org/g/669693/a33827758b/
Chinese Translation: https://e-hentai.org/g/701684/e35813f2ae/

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