Chapter 1 is now completed!
Chapter 2 is ongoing!

Off to a great start, looking forward to the rest of the story! Thank you for sharing it with us!

So good to see that you're back again! If I could rate this 6 stars, I would!!!

Edit 1-11-2015: I hope he doesn't get screwed over again like last time! Sure he's evil, but I'm rooting for him!

Edit 3-26-2015: Noooo. Here we go again with the protagonist getting screwed again!

Last edited on 26 March 2015, 18:29.

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Loving it.
Keep up the good work!

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Absolutely love the direction this seems to be heading (as of page 12)

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want to turn into a girl after taking there picture? well there's an app for that!

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transformed to a girl so to be able to play with one?
Somehow I can see what kind of plot this story is leading to.

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Rinko and Manaka

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What program do you used to create the history?

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HERE WE GO FOR CHAPTER 2 !!!!

Sorry for my bad english... I will update the different mistakes ASAP!
If you find a grammatical error, please send me a message on the forum!

Last edited on 25 October 2014, 12:28.

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Page 20: S/he should try it before knocking it!

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I love it, keep up, i check daily, so I'm not gonna miss any updates

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You should really keep the tag timestop or petrification on here, since your story features a girl being completely frozen in place and played with. There are no other tags to define that, so it falls under the catchall umbrella of those two.

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Wait wait wait wait... what the hell happened to Kara? did he kill her to take her appearence or something?

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Wow, he totally just MIB'd that ending. I can see chapter 2 now...

K[ara]: Did you ever flashy-thing me?
S[am]: No.
K[ara]: I ain't playing with you, S. Did you ever flashy-thing me?
S[am]: No.

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When the second chapter?

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What's with Mind Control stories where the main character is a careless moron? It's so distracting...

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still waiting for ch. 2

Last edited on 10 October 2014, 07:05.

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I would like to see him being forced by another boy while he is in the form of a women that would be very funny
Or One of the girls(Fujoshi) have the same phone and rape him with a copy of any male body

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I think......3 in 1......

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Why did become Death Note all of a sudden?

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lol it reminds me death note

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As much as I dislike even the imagination of rape, this comic is kinda hot. :3

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You put good effort into this work, and I enjoyed reading it. The main criticism I have is that the broken English and unnatural sentences really kill the mood and disrupt the flow of the events. Other than that, you did a pretty great job with this first chapter.

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are these stock characters or did you make them?

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This is a great manga! Love it and can't wait to read the chapter 2 :D

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When is the next one ready!?!?

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BEST. SERIE. EVER.

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Ugh... the grammar is killing me... made? no had a strange dream not made a strange dream... UGH!

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love this :D

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i really wants to see OL and School uniform with high knee socks. :) stockings!!

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yes next level, next level !

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Best TG series I've seen in a while. Keep up the good work

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真神了!用同校生2做的同人故事竟然这么精良，期待后续。感谢。
What a great job!I can't believe the fun story is just using ClassMate2，waiting for more.thanks.

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Wow...that's an OP phone...it has all the abilities I could possibly want lol. I want one xD

Last edited on 01 November 2014, 08:32.

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Great series i cant wait to see more!

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Yeah! Chapter 2!

In my opinion, though, it would have been better as a separate album.

Last edited on 07 November 2014, 23:14.

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Where's the rest?! *chokes on overflowing saliva*

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Well. That got dark.

-edit: God, I hope this doesn't turn into snuff.

-e2
>"What do you expect? This isn't a snuff movie."
>Just killed whoever he was boning.
...
I'm no expert, but I'm pretty sure that just because they explode into light when shot doesn't mean its not snuff. Appreciate you noticing my concern though. And thanks for making it less gory.
Also: that reminded me of the "Standards and Practices" skit on aqua teen. So hard.

Last edited on 22 November 2014, 00:27.

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That dude is quite the asshole.

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If the phone can do all those things, couldn't he just materialize a set of her memories in his own head then?
End of Chapter 2 nice~ Hopefully another update will come sooner this time. That only added like 12 pages, unfortunately.

Last edited on 25 March 2015, 05:57.

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why doesn't he just live his life in luxury and fame with the powers then he could get chicks way better looking than those girls and he would never have any money problems

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Well, I hope you can keep the good work :)
As a fan for Gender Bender Genre...I'm really love the story...BRING MOAR!!!

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When new relase?

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any update?

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Yay! Update!!!!

Now the plot is thickening? But, does the story needed two phones?

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Will we be seeing a chapter 3 soon? please?

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If Death Note was a porno...

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any new update ?

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chapter 2: Dude is not very genre savvy, he is fucked. He won't be so lucky this time :/ The moment I realized they were body swapped I would have been wary of another device and immediately went to subdue them. Even if memory wipe wasn't active he could have gotten rid of him and replaced him with a clone and barring he couldn't do that it was still better than risking capture because then he would truly be powerless. I also wouldn't be stupid enough to think the boyfriend wouldn't know more about his girlfriend's quirks than the guy who has just been stalking her for awhile. The only reason he escaped last time was pure luck.

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This protagonist is fucking stupid. What is it with stories like these and retarded main characters?

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NEED. CHAPTER. 3. NOW!!!!

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At genre like time stop you always root for the "bad guy" but god damn let him do something. 220 pages and there's only one scene where he actually executed any of his plans.

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