nope

BADLY drawn an terrible picture quality. Take this weak shit somewhere else.

Base +9, Darkness Despair Destruction +6, Necronomicron +7

It's not terrible. I can see what the point of the comic is and it displays their emotions rather well, but you need to put a bit of effort into this before i can really recommend it.
Things to do with it - Ink it, don't double post it, have the introduction be right-side up, try to get rid of the background by either scanning it or angling it so nothing else shows.
Do those; while it might not be great, until then is this is probably the only not flame post your going to get.
Hope that helps.

Base +7, CeroSan -10, Darkness Despair Destruction +6, Necronomicron -7, thatfunnynewportguy +6

Study the art books of Andrew Loomis and practice for like a year, then try drawing this again.

Base +5, Necronomicron +7

That tongue on page 7 (° ̊≈≈≈≻

Base +20

Not as bad as some of the stuff that gets posted, but still not entirely the quality that's expected. Everyone has to start somewhere right? With more practice and a revisit I think this can be a relatively well done piece. But for now, I'd give it a 3/10.

Base +8, Sh1n0 +7

Learn how to INK and find a friend who knows how to use a scanner. Ball point pens and cellphone cameras won't earn you much love here. @xshikigami made an excellent suggestion: Google Andrew Loomis; his books may be 75 years old now, but they're still 100% useful and they're available FREE for the downloading.

Base +6

Dibujado como el ojete, pero es más de lo que dibujaré en toda mi vida...

Base +2