Really should've done this on the colored version.

Also, seriously, at least have ONE native speaker proofread it first. There's a lot of people that speak English on the internet.

@saitemaru
An... An entire team worked on this translation? That's really depressing.

Last edited on 13 October 2014, 19:25.

Base +7, Marien +15, wavedash +10, MahoroAndou +7, imercenary +9, Jadia +7, Zero225 +8, shuntensatsu +11, g0su +13, wiloh +7, nonexistant one +6, maleh +17, mickl3 +6, and 11 more...

Don't listen to these ingrates, thank you for translating this. :)

Base +11, g0su -13, Zero225 -8, aurx -9, IntarwebzFTW -6, lowlevel -7, maleh -17, mickl3 -6, dhaljarraque +21, xthilion -6, Zantos +6, messu -13, pedoune -6, and 4 more...

Never saw a title so...descriptive

Base +6, dexipher02 +6, lolzord +7, Zantos +7, Hue_Hue +6

orcs raping elves, you dont say...

Base +5, popioo1234 +6, Kirikim -6, Zantos +7, num21 +6

@mightyhonks
fun fact : the translation team only found out about the color version AFTER they are finished and ready to upload it
no, i'm not making it up, the date explains all lol

Base +6, nonexistant one +6, Anime Janai +11

https://e-hentai.org/g/747649/fd2ef0e8cf/

can you translate color version?

Base +8, shuntensatsu +11, ~Shyboy +4, Bazookaham +8, Porokichin66 +8

HUH? I was just fapping to the colored version yesterday. Now, it's in Engrish and black and white. WTF!

Base +4

@IndexxNecronomicom
You think that's descriptive?
Have a look at this. Not hentai though.

http://bato.to/comic/_/how-i-stalked-some-dude-with-an-exposed-nipple-and-stumbled-upon-the-zenithian-sword-r13196

Base +7, GuroLover12 -8, titoloco -7

Colored or not, I'd still be jerking off to it

Base +6, shinangels +18, Zantos +7, icedwrath +7

Why did I read this with a Russian accent?

Base +1, NanohaFate +6

Would've been nice if there was a first part.

Also, it seems like the length of her hair changes from page to page. Compare https://e-hentai.org/s/8d00d6248b/748262-12 to https://e-hentai.org/s/7ac998037f/748262-19

Last edited on 16 April 2020, 09:54.

Base +7

Lol, impregnation was mostly implied, but still good!

Base +1