Translation:vaasi
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Raw https://e-hentai.org/s/93f4d5b362/725444-157

Thanks for the translation.

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I cant make sense of whats going on here..

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@Ventorez

That's because it has a pretty high number of mistranslations. The worst are pages 13 and 14.

On page 13, that middle right bubble should say something like "You just went nuts again, right?" (referring to Mika), while the bubbles on the left should say something like "Don't treat it like some competition between Yuzuru and you."

Page 14 should have the middle say "I'm never gonna become your husband if I keep this up..."

Both pages are Mika and Yuzuru talking to the other two about what happened.

That being said, it's not bad.

Just keep translating, Vassi. That's the only way to get better.

Last edited on 30 August 2014, 00:24.

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You have disappointed me vaasi

Many Thanks!!

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Shouldn't this have the Shota tag?

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I lost interest in the actual fucking going on and read just to see what happens at the end.
Was disappointed.

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