I'm not natively English speaker, but it was an awkward read for me nonetheless. Commas in weird places and short words divided across lines did it for me. I'm not sure whether the actual translation is awkward, or it's just usual hentai "My hips are moving on their own" speech.

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It's a CGRascal translation. The awkwardness is not in your imagination.

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I think I'll just fap to the cover art since it's so good.

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Why does laruffii get 0 stars and cgrascal get 5?

Ps:
Love editing page 3 cell phone lmfao

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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8Gv0H-vPoDc

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Why does laruffii get 0 stars and cgrascal get 5?

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Holy fucking leg on the cover xD

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Uh, so...

Why did she not stop time?

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Holy jesus those legs!

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Poor Puella Magis, raped and CGRascal'd

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Holy shit, that cover. Screw the rest of the book, this'll do.

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