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[Freehand Tamashii] Shigeo Fever! English (WIP)

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Posted:2014-08-04 16:04
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Language:English  TR
File Size:344.0 KiB
Length:1 pages
Favorited:12 times
Rating:
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Average: 0.64

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Posted on 04 August 2014, 16:04 by:   TheSai    PM
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Work in progress translation.
Posted on 04 August 2014, 16:19 by:   Pockemoncrew    PM
Score +15
In progress XDDD
Posted on 04 August 2014, 16:29 by:   TheSai    PM
Score -33
Sorry about that. I read Adultery Feast about an hour ago and came here looking for the ending. Or continuation, at least. I've never translated before so I don't have any fancy fonts or anything, but I have some time and I want to read it, so I figured I could share.
Posted on 04 August 2014, 17:20 by:   The Last Jedi Master    PM
Score +64
What a twist! Such an intriguing storyline, and that ending full of suspense! All in one page. That`s what hentai should be about.
Posted on 04 August 2014, 18:34 by:   Darktaka    PM
Score -100
Thanks TheSai
Posted on 04 August 2014, 17:42 by:   monkeyneth    PM
Score +133
This is worse than having nothing at all ^^
Posted on 04 August 2014, 19:19 by:   LlamaKid    PM
Score +124
I don't mind in progress translations in principle, but you really need to have more than one goddamn page ready before you post anything.

EDIT: and somehow all of the negative comments have been downvoted to hell. Could you have more obviously sockpuppeted this?
Posted on 05 August 2014, 01:18 by:   senfood    PM
Score +46
While I appreciate your desire to translate a new work from a fantastic artist, you should know that WIP translations never really fly. Come back and post the whole thing when it's fully translated. Until then, good luck and thanks for the interest in Freehand Tamashi!
Posted on 05 August 2014, 02:47 by:   Oriandu    PM
Score +23
You, sir, are a dick head.
Posted on 05 August 2014, 08:19 by:   Zaphod H    PM
Score +12
OK, feedback then:
Font and text layout is awful. Get a font that looks like a cartoon font.

"It's no good, as expected."!!!!!!!
Why do people in manga begin and end sentences with "as expected"?
No one ever uses that in real life.

"It's no good again..." or "still" would be a bit more natural.

Anyway, the art is horrible, censorship is ludicrous. No point in wasting time reading, let alone translating this.
Posted on 07 August 2014, 02:40 by:   tokyorave    PM
Score -9
Why is there so much hate? This translation doesn't even bother me. As long as the translation is moderately good and the font is legible I don't care. Just translate this. Thanks for trying anyway.

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