GAH. MY EYES-

Base +6, Pinaen -8, proslayer +6, horujik -6, Avera +7, Eyriol +7, Lemunz -6

oh lord this hardly qualifies as english

and times new roman holy fuck i don't wanna shit on your efforts but you could have clearly tried harder

Base +7, djagito +9, horujik -6, azrin +7, Biladsan +14, dragonite21 +7, RaLz- -15, Avera +7, Visadio +15, Eyriol +7, Hyoros -8, Rabaa +7

Ignoring the fact that one of my favorite fetishes is being netorared, which I hate, but the atrocious mixture of grammar and spelling just makes this terrible to read. Quality control Shaggy, look at your work and say to yourself, "Is this something I would want to read myself?" If this is, then oh boy, you need help.

@acred2 You'd think we still ban it anyways. It's bad quality, and we apparently already have a better translation of this so there's no reason to keep it at all. I don't think anyone would mind if this disappeared to the fjords.

On a side note, anyone know which one came first? This or The Doll, cause based off a previous comment I saw in the RAW of this, I looked it up, and they're exact carbon copies of each other, but this one has shittier art.

Base +6, RaLz- -15, Avera +7, pop9 -58, minin7 -6, Lemunz -6, visin88 -6

There is a much better translation from 5 years ago. Who is this for, and why?

Base +7, shinangels +12, azrin +7, Avera +7, Miriah +5, prinnymask +1, lostlegoman +8, Lemunz +6, Acerola +12

https://e-hentai.org/g/90860/2ead4541fd/
Are you going to upload the other two chapters separately this time?

And for those of you who are interested better typesetting, Brolen did this a couple years back.
https://e-hentai.org/g/99042/811d92c025/
And just a disclaimer; despite the horrible typesetting and the previous banned uploads from Shaggy himself, this is allowed.
It's not a compilation, and separate from the other two in the series.
And for those of you who keep posting, I don't think pop9 is Shaggy, and I highly doubt your words would get through to him.

@megafighter123
The Doll, if you actually read the comic, is an altered version of Akemi.
It says so on the first page. The Doll is just a shittier, colored version with westernized names and themes. i.e a black guy instead of a country hick, blonde wife, western setting, etc.
And no, we wouldn't, nor should we ban it. Cause despite being a shitty translation, and low quality, alternate translations are accepted. You compromise that rule, and all of a sudden we get a mass of compromised rules.

Base +7, blood racer +7, djagito +9, ZDU +7, RaLz- +15, nww +6, Miriah +5, Nurburgring +6, PoKz +5, Chamma +5, psyburn21 +17, cyberonic +1, psicomenace +7, and 4 more...

why is waifu stealing always ugly dudes

i want more sexy bishounens doing it damn it

Base +5, silverfrapp +2, animegodswrath +7, Regnells +4, TheSale -3, Miriah -5, fail293095 +5, Whiplash -6, Chamma -5, gometa +6, tracingthelines +7, RARmaster +5, Ekse9 -2, and 10 more...

VERY BAD ENGLISH TRANSLATION!!!

Base +5, Chamma +5, Eyriol +7, tracingthelines +7, Hyoros -8, MeloTheYellow +6

So-o... This is what pop9 doing on e-hentai.
What a scrub. Gosh, even my English better than this.

Base +6, pop9 -58

-
-
-

Well, I apparently had nothing to say to begin with, carry on.

Base +5, kikimaru024 -11, Chamma -5, stupid army -7, Lemunz -6, father1 -5, Cloud kun -8, capone1988 -6

i dont know which one is the original..but there's an English version of this manga...but the situation is the opposite, the man is a black man, while the wife is a white woman. It was written by a famous adult comics writer, i forgot his name. he wrote a lot of similar stories, where the wives are all got snatched away by the big black cock...lol

jhon persons...if not mistaken

Base +6, TheSale +3, cyberonic -1, psicomenace -7, RARmaster -5, bobnick23 -7, MeloTheYellow -6, father1 +5, ROBERTOHEN -6, Qotsu -6, freehandtamashiifan -6

Please..more dark skinned girls!

Like the one here:

https://e-hentai.org/g/703881/de6b45b1df/

Base +1, pop9 -58

I tohught Mosquito was prohibited content.

Base +10, kikimaru024 -11, Chamma -5, Lemunz -6, father1 -5, Cloud kun -8, ROBERTOHEN -6, CelestialNTR -6

And NTR continues to get more and more boring. Japan needs to get a new fetish, this one's stale.

Base +6, kikimaru024 -11, Chamma -5, stupid army -7, plester -5, Whiplash -6, RaLz- -15, Lemunz -6, openminded20 -6, visin88 -6, father1 -5

i always wondered if there was a ending to this series

Base +6, yutshu +6

This wouldn't be so bad if the guy's face didn't look like a bowl of spilled oatmeal

Base +6, okmonger +3, Qotsu -6, fryer +6

I don't mind the translation being a bit messed here and there, but when it messes with the reading comprehension to this degree it's a hassle. You have to stop a few times per page and guess at what is meant with what is written.

Base +9, Qotsu +6

@acred2 Where can I find The Doll comic?

Base +1