Cleaned & Typeset by zam005

For the love of god, stop adding "ze" to the end of English sentences.

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It's annoying as hell, but Marisa keeps dropping in ze in those bubbles. It's there in the raws. Is there an english speech pattern or verbal tick that resembles this? If http://japanese.about.com/od/Grammar/a/Sentence-Ending-Particles-1.htm is correct, it's used almost to imply an attitude of superiority on the part of Marisa.

http://www.wordsense.eu/%E3%81%9C/ mentioned that's kind of used in a rougher informal context. Gah it almost sounds like the mafia would use it.

http://en.touhouwiki.net/wiki/Marisa_Kirisame#Personality implies that she has a boyish brash nature. I imagine there's a way to localize this better, as a result, such that ze need not appear constantly.

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I'm glad you kept the -ze.

Marisa is such a punk, and that's what's great about her. Don't fuck with the way she talks.

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Would you prefer they add "yo" instead? There are worse things they could add, even if you don't...believe it.

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-ze is one of those royal pains in the ass to translate, there is really no good way to do it without it sounding terrible as previously mentioned. Some people leave it out but doing so while still relaying her speech pattern then requires a rewrite of her dialogue. Basically, stop bitching this is just a random doujin and if you don't like that this doesnt have a dragon quest tier localization then you are literally weaboo trash.

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its actually not so bad in this one
some of the others have ze at the end of every single sentence
this one had just enough to make it more believable that it is in fact marisa.
a nice playful personality.
after all without her clothes on she just looks like any other random hot blonde.

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