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I know "chu" is a kissing noise, but what is "rero"? Tongue twirling?

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rerorerorerorero

*rolls cherry with tongue*

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@dap00. Rerorerorerorerero is specifically the noise one makes when eating a cherry with ones tongue, most often with a zoned out expression of gormless delight.

Seriously though, you got it right. It's tongue twirling basically.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YvKFRbQwsgA

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Yes, new turning point doujinshi. I Love uehiro artwork, his Haruhi doujinshi is my favorite.

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We need more Yui vanilla doujinshi and less (none would be better) rape.

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need reseed pls ty

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- SFX seems to be translated a bit too literally. For one thing, you don't need to repeat SFX as frequently in English. Rero-rero-rero-rero can just be *lick*.
- Excessive use of ellipses (...)
- Words are broken over the end of a line too frequently.

Combined, these three things result in some seriously bizarre speech bubbles. For example, from page 14:

NNJI-
URU...
NN...
NCHU-
RU...

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please, Continue translating these uehiro's doujins

please, translated all these doujins in English

Last edited on 30 July 2017, 21:20.

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