https://e-hentai.org/g/645489/c00b04ff28/ http://www.doujinshi.org/book/577305/
if anyone wants to re do translation / edit feel free to

Thank you for translating this!!

Will you also be doing this one ?? https://e-hentai.org/g/634049/b6095b1a64/

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Why does CG Rascal keep translating works when he's so terrible at it?

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@khrizto i won't tl yaoi

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This must be what it's like having a stroke, because it appears to be written in English but I can't make out a single goddamn sentence.

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I've confirmed the second half of the translation actually doesn't have many real mistakes. All most of you care about and are smart enough to notice is how it sounds in English; not how true to the original it is, so rather than showing your ignorance you should go read poetry instead.

P.S. The people who voted this down obviously can't read any Japanese. Case proven, the commentators are illiterate idiots.

@prosldo Why do you think the first half was inaccurate? Read my post carefully again.

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The half with more sexual banter than actual dialogue has fewer mistakes than the half with the opposite? Go figure.

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The translation is a shame but at least the art is still pretty good, a few issues with anatomy not withstanding.

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@Killer_Kittens_Klub, The Goat is Watching
You mean you don't like it? When every other sentence. Is a question?

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http://www.doujinshi.org/book/577305/Love-Potion-Vanguard/
RAW: https://e-hentai.org/g/645489/c00b04ff28/

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