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The link you provided leads to a different doujinshi!
Edit: I'm not talking about the expansion part but your wish for replacement. Probably, you wanted to tell us that this is the sequel to the mentioned doujinshi.
This is not only expanding the intro; it's still different in the end, being that it was completely redrawn/reorganized, as opposed to simply more pages added to the old ones. It's like the pilot chapter of the Naruto manga vs the serialized version. Same artist, story (overall), but separated by upgraded art, and a retelling.
There's no need to replace the Sputnik intro altogether.