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(Sho-N-D) Game Over (Super Mario Bros.) [ENGLISH] [Extra SPEECH and NARRATION Edition] Full Comic

Western
Posted:2014-03-19 03:06
Parent:None
Visible:Yes
Language:English  RW
File Size:8.35 MiB
Length:14 pages
Favorited:973 times
Rating:
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Average: 4.48

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Posted on 19 March 2014, 03:06 by:   A-Akuma    PM
Uploader Comment
To EVERY single page, I added ENGLISH narration, speech bubbles, and text (ever careful it was all appropriate, unobtrusive). I did this to fully flesh out the plot since I personally enjoy "story/dialogue" as much as "sex/action" when I read a doujin or erotic comic.

This is the ONLY ENGLISH edition of this release, these panels that exist right now (AFAIK).

ALL the WORDS are MY OWN but ALL the FANTASTIC, TERRIFIC art, and basically EVERYTHING is given TOTAL credit to the original creator/s. They deserve the praise although I hope you like what I did by sharing your opinion in the comments below...
Posted on 19 March 2014, 03:25 by:   jker209    PM
Score +33
Well... The super ho part made me laugh a bit...
Posted on 19 March 2014, 11:53 by:   A-Akuma    PM
Score +39
Much thanks to all who seem to be enjoying this! You guys are the coolest! I mean I know the original text-less panels still "got it" but the added stuff just makes it more fun/complete to my tastes.

Hah, and yeah, I didn't want it to end on a total downer - I mean maybe the princess was a REAL PRUDE to Mario before this AND this whole f'ed up experience FINALLY allowed Mario to get a bit of what he REALLY wanted from her down the road...lol. Otherwise, view it like a cartoon - no character is ever really offended - everybody's actually a powered-up super-ho and so on, etc...lol.
Posted on 19 March 2014, 04:37 by:   GlassWing    PM
Score +155
Can't fap too busy laughing.
Posted on 19 March 2014, 05:10 by:   Demiroth    PM
Score +9
Uhh I hope the person who made the edits actually changes doujinshi to western because this is the work of a western artist man.
Posted on 19 March 2014, 08:20 by:   Stripey    PM
Score +20
I question the safety of sex with that many Spinys around.
Posted on 19 March 2014, 10:32 by:   kooko    PM
Score +42
Mario finally makes it to save peach and she's sucking some other person? WT-? "and don't worry mario eventually "got some" too" oh i guess thats cool then lol. Seriously thou this peach is wa~y hotter than the original.
Posted on 19 March 2014, 14:57 by:   HappyiYa    PM
Score +21
Well atleast Mario gets some too.
Posted on 19 March 2014, 21:17 by:   Sancho_Panza    PM
Score +24
Pg. 11

lol! Ghost loads...
Posted on 22 March 2014, 19:42 by:   EternalFanboy    PM
Score +33
Thank you Mario! But your princess's tongue is in some other asshole.
Posted on 22 March 2014, 20:05 by:   Yosh_    PM
Score +27
Actually decent rewrite A-Akuma, just some tips:
1- Use a better font, for example, Anime Ace or Wild Words.
2- It's obvious that the bubbles were whited out in paint. Why not get photoshop or at least GIMP to make it look better?

Good work!

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