Page 24: Turns out that it was the shounen lead, using magic, after all.

For a moment there I thought it was gonna be more blatant NTR. Whew!

@AnimeLov3rxXx: Well she's a magician as well; the very magician who taught him magic. So she probably knew. And also she probably has a fetish for ugly fat men.

@@AnimeLov3rxXx: You know, that sounds suspiciously like the very argument I had against the fact that most anime now is anti-shounen, pro-yuri, pro-femdom, filled with more effects than actual story-telling, and redundantly redundant. Unfortunately for me; crap like that's "profitable." It's a good thing to make money. So why not do what makes you money?

I mean: If doujin creators weren't making money, then (after finding out that people are downloading their works without their profit) they'd quit en mass.

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So out of character.

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Lol, so it isn't NTR at all.... it's just the MC transformed as a big fat ass lol.

@irrelevance90: but if he can do magic... he also could make his dick monster-size with magical powers that make any women his slave? :D

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YES!! His first book was magical.

*Technically it's netorare. Ayaka didn't know that the old man was Takamiya and she said all the standard NTR lines like bearing the old man's child, his dick is better than Takamiya and how she belongs to the old guy now.

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I see what you did there Leopard...

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she had no idea till page 24 what a fucking lame cop out
she was fucking an old guy
she didn't fucking know it was him yet she spread her legs like a good little brainless cumbucket.
it is netorare or at the very least cheating since she had no idea till the end.

funniest part is she then has the BALLS to be mad at HIM

@Hectotane no see that's the beauty of it
some doujin artists make parodies while completely ignoring the characters personalities/ powers/ feelings
they just ignore everything and take the shell that is the character and do whatever they desire with it
just to profit from the popularity the characters have

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agreed with AnimeLov3rxXx
this is cheating , the girl didnt know till the end and go fuck a fatty bastard
if this doujin ended pg 23 was NTR
(sorry for my bad english not my mother lenguage)

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WT-f reverse NTR LOL (You got me)

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For a NTR the ending twist was something didn't see coming. Good read.

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What a copout. Not that it was possible to begin with anyway.

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jajaja jaja fui completamente engañado es que netorare y resulte que el viejete era takamiya bueno me lo suponia por que kagari no dejaria a takamiya y sospeche que takamiya la hizo vestir haci como muestran en la pag 03 bueno cuando vi que takamiya fue quien la mando no me dio problema ya que el estaba consiente de lo que ella hiba hacer ademas el fue el que la mando pero para mi sorpresa del final el era el viejete con razon no lo quemo jajaj fui completamente engañado pero un ntr haci no est mal ya que la historia es haci se parece a esos NTR donde las vuelven esclavas pero kagari va a coger su venganza al parecer se volvio una sadica total jaja

bueno a decir verda me senti enojado ya que esta historia o animacion no es para hacer un NTR si no huvieran puesto la pag 24 para aclarar fuera sido un NTR de esos donde son mandadas por el maestro en este caso takamiya la mando haci que no havi problema en la pag 3 que vi sevio claramente haci que pense esto ya no es ntr solo es halgo como para dar exitacion y no ver lo mismo de siempre pero con el final que le dieron que de fue sorprendido de todas manera estuvo bueno con ese final si huviera terminado en la pag 23 daria lo mismo no seria ntr ya que todo fue planeado por takamiya en la pag 3 por empezar el fue el que la hizo vestIR haci XD

haha I was completely fooled is that Netorare and prove that viejete was Takamiya good to me supposed that Kagari would not fail to Takamiya and suspected Takamiya made ​​dress haci good when I saw Takamiya was who command gave me no problem since he was aware of what she was going to do besides that he was the charge but to my surprise at the end he was the viejete rightly jajaj not burn but was completely deceived haci ntr is not bad since the story is haci resembles those NTR where Kagari become slaves but will apparently get his revenge is complete sadistic returned haha

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How could anyone possibly like drawing NTR? These fatcat doujin artists are making too much money off my waifu.

get outta here

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Totally did not see that coming. Takamiya can use magic? That's a first.

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Awesome, I love NTR but this is one pairing that I also love so here I have basically two of my favorite things, besides is the new work form Leopard so even more happines, you just make my day, really thank you very much.
On the other hand, c'mon @rolkanios, aun si hubiera sido completamente NTR no hubiera habido ningun problema, NTR es una de los mejores generos que hay, vamos si estamos viendo hentai es por algo ¿no? al fin y al cabo el NTR no es nisiquiera uno de los generos más hardcore.
BTW I just came to notice that we really need a translation (BTW thnk you for the info of what she says @irrelevance90), is just this doujinshi is so awesome.

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LOL you can't NTR yourself when you're the guy doing the fucking.

Learn to NTR

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レオパルド大先生

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if I well know the character at anime she would never do that to a stranger. at least burn the whole train

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Both this and the first one need to be translated pronto (but mostly the first one...)!

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Hmm. If I were to buy this DJ IRL, I would definitely remove those last panels on the last page somehow and pretend it didn't exist :p

Oh dear, I value more NTR over comedy. I wonder what fetish will I develop next.

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Dohoho, master dick move from Takamiya~ (Pun intended)
Need to have this one translated as well~

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