This is my first English translation. Might be sloppy.
Don't know Persona, so hopefully I translated things correctly...

really
since when people prefer to just post the translated version? happened a few times when I wanna fap
I personally prefer original at least, really hope you could upload it

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For a first translation, it pretty good. Not knowing anything about Persona, but still getting a pretty good gist about the names and terms makes it even better. Overall a great job.

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A few grammar mistakes, but nothing too bad. Congrats, you beat CGRascal level on your first attempt.

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Just a correction... this is Persona 4 Arena not Persona 3.

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original one been posted tho...

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You sir deserve a round of applaud.... there are many korean translated works out waiting to be turned into English. Keep up the fine job !

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Kind sir, I applaud you for such endeavors! lol jk, but thanks a lot for accepting my bounty.

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It's pretty good traslation. thanks for this

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The beginning makes no sense given my knowledge of Persona, but it seems like typical H-doujin fare, so I'm inclined to believe that it's not an error in *translation*, but rather the original author of the doujin disregarding the Persona setting.

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Mitsuru must have some suppress feeling in her

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Nothing better than breaking a strong woman with sex.

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