when the Control Unit goes out...

The english in here is incomprehensible and I have no idea what's going on.
Also why are the characters facing in only one direction? You should really fix that if you want improve on your artwork.
There's always room for potential.

Base +10, grimest -4

^Characters are only facing one direction because of the software used to make this- it's extremely limited to where you can model your characters to look like whatever and pose however but they can only be facing forwards. Also, I didn't find the English incomprehensible. It's a little off seeing as how this was probably Google Translated from Spanish, but I was still able to follow along.

Base +1, grimest +4