raw https://e-hentai.org/s/5b448deb86/479946-26

This is rewrite

Base +43, bucket90 +5, primeemu16 +6, Worrick +6, Paizurikin +9, piedol +6

As much as I like the artist, this one just doesn't capture the spirit of the original...at all.

Base +8, troll445 +7, maxelvi-san +9, biscardone +4, Paizurikin +9

These imperfect items are perfect for us.

Base +10, DireWolf505 +16, Dustfinger +10, Paizurikin -9

I want a furry at home now ! <3

Base +4, robert971 +5

This is not a review but a question...
When you say this is a "rewrite" is there a different translation?
When you say this one doesn't capture the spirit of the original... is there a different translation?

Base +8, Luke78 +8, maxelvi-san +9, biscardone -4, Paizurikin -9

It's not about whether there is a different translation. It's about Trump having asked people not to do shit like this.

Rated "go fuck yourself, leave Trump's stuff alone."

Base +5, bucket90 +5, biscardone +4, Zero Tachikoma +8, Paizurikin +9, wertderp +7, lold +6

Typo in page 9 panel 3 "and" it should be removed

Base +7, hellbolt -6

Rewrites are an affront against nature. Never in all my life have I encountered one that wasn't disgustingly bad. Indeed, even imagining someone sitting down with the intent to write their own bad dialog makes me cringe. Imagining the time they spent on it and the effort they put into editing it makes me nauseous. Please. Never rewrite. If you must be creative do something original.

Base +6, Necronomicron +7, biscardone +4, hellbolt -6, epiq fail +6, bucket90 +6, Daneasaur +5, Zero Tachikoma +8, fadefade +14, Paizurikin +9, wertderp +7, piedol +6, Qmannn +7, and 1 more...

I took the time to ready both of them... and well the original is best.. this rewrite is not to my taste...

Base +6