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Fetishist Setsuko-san & Bride Setsuko-San [English] [Rewrite] [Decensored] [Incomplete]

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Posted:2013-10-21 13:35
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Language:English  RW
File Size:2.21 MiB
Length:6 pages
Favorited:34 times
Rating:
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Average: 1.20

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Posted on 21 October 2013, 13:35 by:   CrossLegacy    PM
Uploader Comment
A test rewrite of the gallery found here: https://e-hentai.org/g/639956/9d45e8449d/
I've no talent in translation, but found the piece too good to have a translation that reads like a bad Chinese subtitle. If you're fine with this sample (more than 3.5 starts by tomorrow), I'll finish the gallery, if not well, I've had worse. :)
Posted on 21 October 2013, 13:49 by:   Randomguy664    PM
Score +194
Just say no to rewrites.
Posted on 21 October 2013, 13:50 by:   yejz    PM
Score +272
Oh this is awe-
>REWRITE

0.5 stars forever and nothing more
Posted on 21 October 2013, 13:56 by:   bladedfool    PM
Score -53
You can read it, and it's understandable so it's decent enough. As long as it's not straying off at all from the original story.

A lot more better than the other "translation"
Posted on 21 October 2013, 14:00 by:   colossol    PM
Score +244
You can't reliably get back anything that's been lost in the original translation. I and others do appreciate the effort but this is not the way to go about it. If you really want to clean up the translation then you need to go back to the original material.
Posted on 21 October 2013, 15:39 by:   ncc1701z    PM
Score +44
I could be wrong, but after a quick comparison, I think the uploader meant "Re-Edit".
In that regard, @colossol was right.
Posted on 22 October 2013, 02:41 by:   mellowjello    PM
Score +6
Well, this just made me want to read the original.
Posted on 22 October 2013, 05:13 by:   vgjunky    PM
Score +32
call it a re-edit next time
Posted on 22 October 2013, 09:39 by:   oneiwonder    PM
Score +11
Exactally as colossol said thanks for the effort but you just can't. ether commission this with a group or start a bounty for a translation. If you do the bounty i will be happy to contribute a bit to it as well. Like the others said before say Re-edit next time.
Posted on 18 August 2015, 18:25 by:   Victor DoUrden    PM
Score +10
Why is this still unfinished? Not even a fucking rewrite, just edited to be better. Probably a 100 dumbass fucks didn't even look just pushed 1 star when the word rewrite came up

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