This comic is a sequel to the other 'Metal to metal' fancomic I posted on my Smackjeeves account.
Although the first episode was not rated with mature content, I've put the filter on for this episode. The first 7 pages are viewable for all ages. Then some more explicit pages follow. If you don't want to read with the explicit pages (which is entirely possible and the story still makes sense!), please read this comic at:
http://sofie3387.deviantart.com/art/FMA-Edwin-M2M-episode-2-page-1-335185221

It's impossible to read. What is this, a resolution for ants?!

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The first page is indeed difficult to read but after that it works ok.
This may not be the most proffesional drawings I've seen, but hell, I really like them. It's also a nice break from ever other novel posted in the galleries which look exactly the same and has a story that's been repeated 500 times over, with cheesy characters and dumb lines. How does anyone enjoy reading about girls just throwing themselves on every dick they can see? To me that is just a mystery. Enough rambling, great novel. Hope to see you continue working on it!

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as of this writing, pics 55 and 56 are identical to 53 and 54 respectively...

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based on page name i think there a page missing between page 57 and 58

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I'm looking forward to the next part

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