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(C81) [Pigeon Blood (Asou Shin)] LOVE OR LUST (Touhou Project) [English]

(C81) [鳩血 (麻生シン)] LOVE OR LUST (東方Project) [英訳]

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Posted:2013-08-27 00:11
Parent:624164
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Language:English  TR
File Size:17.71 MiB
Length:68 pages
Favorited:433 times
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Posted on 27 August 2013, 00:11 by:   The Dark Write    PM
Uploader Comment
It's that time of the month for Meiling, and she's avoiding Sakuya. But "that time" turns out to be something quite different for youkai. (Futanari content.) All credit for translations belong to Danbooru.
Posted on 25 August 2013, 23:55 by:   Chinro    PM
Score +89
Nice to have this in an easy downloadable format no matter who translated it.
Posted on 26 August 2013, 03:29 by:   rstitan    PM
Score +28
easily one of the best futanari here
Posted on 26 August 2013, 21:39 by:   Zelinko    PM
Score +54
You have some issues with text spacing still. I'd suggest using a bit of a different font as it seems to scale strangely.

A way you could improve is to look at Page 26 Sakuya's line of "I'm Cumming....!!!" could have I'm being center aligned to better use the space you have there.

So Center align I'm [Enter] Cumming.

It's better than before but still there is a bit more polish you could do for this one. You might have to fiddle around with the text boxes by manually making blocks at times with only a few words in it instead of letting Wordwrap take care of it and its alignment, sure it's a bit more effort but it'll make it look much better better

Another example is Patchouli's dialogue on page 32
Edit: Check page 62 I think you got a typo on Page 62 with the bottom left panel
Edit 8/26 version: The font you're using might need some manual spacing to help fix problems as return really looks like retum with how your font is. Possibly slip a space in there or photoshop it a little wider.
Posted on 28 August 2013, 03:03 by:   PepsiVisa    PM
Score +23
Wow, no Abuelito comment? Did he get sent to Banland?

Anyway, art is good. Futa is fine, that's about all I can say.

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