NOT A PROPER TRANSLATION OR PROFESSIONAL JOB

Only done to pass the time, so if you wish to leave a negative review, please keep it polite.

I.... wish I had that kind of free time? O_o

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Hey not to sound rude most rewrite are horrible..... you should use this free time to do something productive like masturbating furiously

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language: rewrite(136) english(133)

-_-

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Thanks a lot. To me, it's better than reading Japanese.

@crazymagic Of course. It's better to read some imaginative work than Japanese.

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please, if you have enough free time to do rewrite, you have time to actually learn Japanese.

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Page 15: "Hmm, boobie."

... really?

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@FireShark, do you know what a rewrite is??

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If you want some tips:
1. Try keeping to the same font. (There are blogs with suggestions on good comic/manga fonts)
2. If it requires re-working in text bubbles that are semi-transparent, and you don't have the skill to do it, either fill them in completely, or leave this work for someone else.
3. Centre the text down the centre of the bubbles (look at other professionals works for this)
4. Use a tool that gives a nice smooth font, not the pixelated thin one you've used. You don't want the text to jump out at you because of the low quality.

Otherwise, props on keeping mostly to good grammar and punctuation. Most rewrites lack this, and that's the real boner killer.

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This is why peeps keep downvote for this?

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