Well now, before anything else, I feel that it's more important than usually that I say this: I'm no pro-translator, I'd describe my understanding of japanese as being that of a gifted amateur at best and english isn't my first language. I stress this, because this one was more difficult for me to translate than the stuff I usually translate. There was lots of "Techno Babble" (as Tvtropes puts it) and the like in this one, but nontheless, I've done my best trying to get it right, so enjoy :) .

Oh, and if anyone asks if I have any plans on doing the "sequel" of this one... Not in the immediate future, I think I'll go for translating something which doesn't require me to look up JWPce all the time or has me spending 10-15 minutes thinking "Okay, so how the hell do I translate this part!?" next...

Edit: Discovered an error on page 27 >_<. Deleted the old page 27 and uploaded the corrected one...

really appreciate the work.

its fine enough for me to understand,

dont bother with the small stuff!

keep up the good work ;)

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This was a really good job. Don't be so down on yourself.

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No problems that I can see. Very well done.

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is there a prequel to this one?

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@Darkspooky: It's just nice to see someone cared enough to even translate this. This was kind of low on my list of posting bounties, but i'll consider the sequel in the near future if I clear up enough of my backlog or someone comes forward wanting to do it. All that aside, thanks for doing this. =3

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It's rly good to see some work of Light Rate translated.

I hope to see soon a translation of his best work (in my opnion) Gatchaman.

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This is such garbage.

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THANK YOU!!!! Please do the other one to.

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Genial trabajo se te agradece mucho

Great job thank you so much

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