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[DJ-black-n-white] Tsundere Rainbow Dash

Western
Posted:2013-05-22 19:45
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Language:English  
File Size:25.23 MiB
Length:35 pages
Favorited:243 times
Rating:
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Average: 4.76

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Posted on 22 May 2013, 19:45 by:   Rikis    PM
Uploader Comment
Written by Kyonko802 http://pastebin.com/AN75D2Sw Illustrated by dj-black-n-white http://dj-black-n-white.deviantart.com/
Posted on 22 May 2013, 20:10 by:   jaylou1010    PM
Score +20
This is the first human x pony comic I've seen. It's a strange feeling that it is taken so seriously. I like it, but I wish the art didn't get sketchy once the action started. I'd rather have bad 'story art' and decent 'adult art' than the other way around.

P.S. Page 07: Fahrenheit is apparently preferred in Equestria.
Posted on 22 May 2013, 20:27 by:   Kyonko802    PM
Score +209
WTF

When did someone draw this?

The added porn part was kinda weird, but everything else... man.

Thank you for posting this, maybe I should go back to AiE.

Hmm.

Edit: Oh and for reference, my story ended on page 20. It might be part of the reason the second part looks so sketchy. The artist probably just whipped it up when people asked for it.
Posted on 22 May 2013, 20:19 by:   Bastemorphus    PM
Score -20
Aaaand i was wondering when would riding starts. Storyboard is amazing. Still makes me wonder why porn staff is half-assed...
Posted on 22 May 2013, 21:16 by:   satelitko    PM
Score +114
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Last edited on 24 March 2024, 18:42.
Posted on 22 May 2013, 23:52 by:   Axl666    PM
Score +169
So, I read this, I go to the bathroom to take a piss, look at the mirror, and notice a happy smile on my face. Wow.
Posted on 23 May 2013, 00:14 by:   Imwatchenyoufap    PM
Score +1
All in all i can be snob in my tasts in hentai and porn... That being said i have to tip my hat and maybe my dick to this art work. Well done great story line. Needs a bit more to complet the world in it. But i see a devloping story coming. Keep up the great work,Im waiting with baited breath and hard dick to read future comixs.
Posted on 23 May 2013, 00:48 by:   ZDaichi    PM
Score +83
I came for porn...and it certainly was porn...just not the porn I expected...at all...
Posted on 23 May 2013, 00:57 by:   Asmødeus    PM
Score +58
I enjoyed this far more then I thought I would. Most my little pony xxx comics are half assed doodles, this however is well thought out even though its not done. "When did I stop hating you?" *giggle*
Posted on 23 May 2013, 04:09 by:   sigismund    PM
Score +16
Very cute. I'd have liked the sex scene to be more drawn out (get it?), but the beginning build up was very pleasing.
Posted on 23 May 2013, 04:18 by:   fogpet    PM
Score +14
I've literally read this story awhile back... I never thought I'd see this in porn format.
Posted on 23 May 2013, 09:41 by:   lokied    PM
Score +8
I don't clop, but this comic is fucking good. I think my penis jumped a little... Oh good, it's still down.
Posted on 23 May 2013, 13:08 by:   Kyou Fujibayashi    PM
Score +28
I guess this is how my story would look like. Somewhat.
Posted on 04 June 2013, 03:53 by:   786014    PM
Score +14
HOLY SHIT! I REMEMBER THIS STORY!
Posted on 08 June 2013, 04:36 by:   DragonNegro1989    PM
Score +10
Just today I downloaded the series, yet saw not even the first chapter, but I already like hentai, and quite incredibly, I am no fan of the furry, and yet I really liked this, please bring more ...! ! THANK YOU! ^ ^
Posted on 19 June 2013, 20:05 by:   DeronRav    PM
Score +8
Well that's describe mostly bronys dreams...
Posted on 24 June 2013, 03:48 by:   MikinTodo    PM
Score +3
Certainly wasn't expecting something good when seeing the title. Glad I was wrong.
Posted on 26 September 2013, 07:48 by:   errata    PM
Score +9
Winking Clitoris. Okay.

This is good. I wish this was the average writing level for fan-porn. Art, as other people said, got sketchy, and the handwriting was a bit hard to read in places, but was still good overall.

I'm kinda wanting to know if there are any other parts to this story. Gonna have to look it up.

@ jaylou1010: Well, My Little Pony is American, a good percentage of the fans are American, and most clocks that display temperature also let you choose which units are displayed.
Posted on 13 June 2014, 12:42 by:   l4chuga    PM
Score +1
I read Anon's dialogue in Steve Blum's voice for some reason... But, it was a beautiful story, and not bad with the added porn part. Wish there was more. ^^
Posted on 09 March 2014, 21:18 by:   Tsuruchi    PM
Score +6
Very nice writing and enjoyable, if the author and/or artist still reads these posts, I'd encourage both to do more, I'd love to read them.

The writing is sweet and believable, the porn part being good, but not why you come back to read it again.

The added touches of the art, like his Celestia playboy calender, and Lyra staring at him, give it a genuine and connected feel.
Thanks.
Posted on 19 January 2015, 22:44 by:   Blue Mage    PM
Score -3
I hope he's gotten better since making this. The composition is goddamn atrocious. This is either the first comic layout he's ever done or one of the first. It screams amateur artist. Also, cartoon horse fantasy. That screams amateur, as well.
Posted on 08 February 2015, 09:34 by:   Third Sword    PM
Score +4
I came to this LOOOOOOOl

I can now honestly-to-God say i've truly crossed the line into madman territory. Drinks on me!
Posted on 08 October 2015, 21:30 by:   BlackShadowKing    PM
Score +1
well done I do enjoy the art form
but if you ask me you didn't really need the sex seen at the end
not that it wasn't good or anything

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