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[xMLx] Devotion [In Progress]

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Posted:2013-03-30 13:07
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File Size:10.76 MiB
Length:26 pages
Favorited:2101 times
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Posted on 08 April 2013, 16:28 by:   v1c0d1n    PM
Score +375
this one needs be in constant update,would love to see the story progressing for the nun

Also: It would be better to save up a bunch of the drawing and add them all at once until its finish. Good day to you sir.
Posted on 24 April 2013, 05:46 by:   xMLx    PM
Score +1216
Thanks for the kind words. I know artists "should" be self-motivated, but external support helps. I was originally planning 30 pages, but it looks like it will probably go over, Maybe to 35.

Unfortunately, no I am not going to re-do the crappier early pages. I know the last few pages show a marked improvement (I didn't figure out how comics worked for a while). But I feel that I cannot go back and correct myself, otherwise I would be stuck spending all my time doing that. Hopefully when I'm done I will move on to bigger and better things.

Also, big thanks to "DMVirgin" who helped write much of the story after the first dozen or so pages. I want to re-release the title page with some credits on it.

[update] sorry about the delay. I got a couple of commissions so it may hold up the comic for a few weeks.
Posted on 12 October 2012, 21:38 by:   Fastrin    PM
Score +207
Interesting story, looking forward to update.
Posted on 06 November 2012, 20:07 by:   Silkinsane    PM
Score +255
Great story and good art! I am interested to see it progress. My only critique is that the font type for the initial diary entry is a little tough to read, and it looks to be cut off at the edge.
Posted on 06 November 2012, 20:19 by:   Nexev    PM
Score +326
As a heads up, the upside down cross represents devotion to god.

After all Saint Patrick was crucified upside down.

So the demon's design may need some editing.
Posted on 10 November 2012, 23:23 by:   arkboy    PM
Score +244
@Kieyzo That's because years of misrepresentation in modern media have lead to it being viewed as a satanic symbol. However it's original use was to represent Saint Paul, who had himself crucified with an inverted cross, so that it would not look as though he was as important as Jesus.

That being said I don't think it's use in this work is an issue, due to our perception of it as demonic anyway. The comment saying he needs to change his design because of that is a little ridiculous... hardly anyone would know otherwise.

On the other hand if you're blindly going to post telling him his comment is wrong, at least do some research first. Proper punctuation and grammar wouldn't go a miss either, then people may not just think you're a retard.
Posted on 25 July 2013, 11:25 by:   Doom Wing Angel    PM
Score +165
waiting for more
Posted on 08 December 2012, 10:00 by:   Happless    PM
Score +99
Page 17 made me chuckle.
Posted on 08 December 2012, 18:53 by:   anubix    PM
Score +105
@xMLx

If you need a 'screen play writer' of some kind, I'm stepping forward. Here's a little bit, to show an example of what kind of work I could do for you, if you've need of it. Let me know if you like this, or if you'd prefer I write something else, or if you'd prefer I not assist you with your work.

http://pastebin.com/FE3e3Crj
Posted on 10 December 2012, 15:48 by:   Kledvger    PM
Score +137
keep at it! corruption makes me ultra happy.
Posted on 13 December 2012, 23:52 by:   Nack    PM
Score +95
Well detailed artwork? Classic but underdone demon/nun theme? Good use of transformations and slow corruption with a futanari fetish? Amazing stuff. If the only thing keeping you from getting it out faster is a writer, I'd ask that you either take up anubix on his offer, or find someone else who wouldn't mind a pet artist with your very strong talents. I know I wouldn't, so drop me a message if you want to see what I can do. Either way, you should have writers lining up to help you, so take your pick, and get this thing out! :D
Posted on 03 November 2013, 05:02 by:   random2003    PM
Score +149
Great comic. <3 Looking forward for the rest of planned pages.

Come on. >~< Only a few pages left~ @u@

Umm... just to clarify, will there be any more updates? ...or is the comic actually done? ._.
Posted on 11 January 2013, 05:39 by:   KronosMancer    PM
Score +99
great comic and concept, also as of page 20 saying the demon is the mother superior its just seems foreshadowing...or she could be a slave of the demon that is also possible...then again this is hentai so the mother superior likely has an even larger penis and is fapping it...anyways page 18 makes me laugh
Posted on 11 January 2013, 08:51 by:   Savvic    PM
Score +115
This is one of those rare works that has a story that grips me more than the artwork (not saying the artworks sucks though; it's pretty good).
Posted on 30 January 2013, 15:18 by:   seyfer    PM
Score +99
isn't there a blog, or web site, to check this comic update?
Posted on 01 February 2013, 08:48 by:   StrangeAeons    PM
Score +73
Great little comic, lots of fun tormenting and corruption. Looking forward to seeing the nun end up like on the cover~! Keep up the good work!
Posted on 18 February 2013, 21:47 by:   keithtiz    PM
Score +65
Added new torrent for the update 2/18/13. Good series!
Posted on 03 March 2013, 04:45 by:   Raven_55    PM
Score +76
Great series hope you update soon
Posted on 03 March 2013, 14:37 by:   xXfirebirdXx    PM
Score +82
Just awesome, man =)
Posted on 03 March 2013, 17:54 by:   deaddogd    PM
Score +77
This is the best nun porn i've seen in years.
Posted on 11 April 2013, 23:08 by:   tjackson41    PM
Score +50
i took the liberty to create a slideshow and rescript the first three pages so it could be understood....look at it and tell me what you think.. http://antjacks-femalepossession-mindcontrol.blogspot.com/2013/04/shinra-kun-yoru-no-majin-tower-of-sin.html
Posted on 05 March 2013, 01:45 by:   Unfortune    PM
Score +55
Right up there with Convent of Hell.
Posted on 25 March 2013, 03:31 by:   Niggaoshot    PM
Score +73
Fell in love with the art
Posted on 25 March 2013, 08:25 by:   giovanny    PM
Score +59
was gooddd
Posted on 25 March 2013, 13:18 by:   Luminard    PM
Score +57
Oh great

Lets add another comic I will be checking for updates

Honestly everything that needed to be said was said already. Keep up the amazing work
Posted on 29 June 2013, 19:29 by:   jibai    PM
Score +74
what happen to this comic?
it's that going to continue?
Posted on 30 March 2013, 19:08 by:   D1g1tal    PM
Score +43
@ Doom Wing Angel
Some notes:

Demon(Daemon) - a neutral being with leathery wings who's never lie, never do evil things. Wise. Darkness. The 3rd Side
Fallen angel - an "officially" punished and unwinged bad angel. It's fell and can't fly anymore. Silly. Unholy. The 2nd Side
Fiend - an evil (or unholy) spirit, servant of devil. It's negative impact on the people. Have no own mind. Unholy. The 2nd Side
Devil/devils - an evil being(s) who don't have any wings and hate demons, humans and angels. Silly. Unholy. The 2nd Side
Angel - an active opponent of devils and Demons who sometimes do bad things to humans (out of jealousy for Demons). Artful/sly. Holy. The 1st Side

A Succubus is a female Demon/Demoness who's friendly to good humans (but she can kill evil humans).
Summoning of demons is imposible.

Correct (upright) Pentagram - is a good symbol. Means 5 elements: 4 of the Nature and 5th is a Spirit on the top.
Inverted Pentagram - is a bad/satanic (unholy) symbol that means 'substitution of truths' (the Spirit on the down).
http://www.urbandictionary.com/define.php?term=pentagram

P.S. How many sides does have a medal? Two? Nope, three. And a truth is in the middle.
Thank you for your time! Best wishes, guys.
Posted on 31 March 2013, 08:53 by:   enther    PM
Score +61
Should she change her tune a little slower?
Posted on 31 March 2013, 22:13 by:   Nwahiri    PM
Score +52
This is really good
Posted on 04 April 2013, 13:57 by:   Pendorcho    PM
Score +43
@xMLx:
Once this project is finished, Are you gonna re-do the first Black & White Pages in color?
Great Work! Keep it coming!
Posted on 06 April 2013, 00:16 by:   Shadow of Legend    PM
Score +54
@D1g1tal:

"Summoning of demons is imposible."

What about asking them nicely to hang out with you for a while?

How many more pages are planned for this little gem?
Posted on 07 April 2013, 12:30 by:   mumble    PM
Score +49
That's nice progress. Your art greatly improving as the new pages are coming. You know how to keep reader in constans tension ..
Posted on 07 April 2013, 13:46 by:   Enki17    PM
Score +53
Relative to most western artists these days, you're pretty fast. Big ups to ya.
Posted on 08 April 2013, 12:32 by:   ichimurakun    PM
Score +39
Page 28 Succubus rocking new shoes?
Posted on 11 April 2013, 20:22 by:   9elf    PM
Score +40
fucking cool ;) very best comic i ever seen :D
Posted on 11 April 2013, 22:23 by:   scorpianpp    PM
Score +70
@xMLx - updated page 28
Posted on 11 April 2013, 22:28 by:   damask    PM
Score +49
All the continued hard work to bring this series out is much appreciated. It's sexy and delicious.
Posted on 15 May 2013, 22:15 by:   dsbportal    PM
Score +35
i love this
Posted on 21 June 2013, 11:41 by:   Seriegubben    PM
Score +39
This is absolutely fantastic, but seriously, you need to hurry up and finish this already! :)
Posted on 14 August 2013, 23:43 by:   zanepepper    PM
Score +73
Glad to see this continued. I was beginning to think it was dropped.
Posted on 18 August 2013, 15:50 by:   613    PM
Score +42
Thank you so much for the update/new page! I had just lost hope, and then the new one popped up! Thanks again, I love your style and story~
Posted on 02 September 2013, 15:17 by:   burlok    PM
Score +36
This is one of the best corruption-stories i've ever seen. It dosen't matter if it takes a while, as long as it will be finished.

A sequel would be awesome. I would not mind seeing her corrupt the whole convent. But I guess that would be too much to ask.
Posted on 02 September 2013, 18:27 by:   maleh    PM
Score +37
Great art work, fantastic job.

Just wondering why you decided to abandon the oval speech bubbles? I do think they looked better.
Posted on 23 February 2014, 15:45 by:   kyleblue    PM
Score +35
keeps going .. more corruption .. infect the whole place .. muahhhahahahahaha .. ahm . sorry :)
Update: please don't drop this comic .. it seems it's going in the right direction so far ... please keep working on it
Posted on 26 October 2013, 11:42 by:   Thuzadin    PM
Score +34
Some of the most exciting and prominent features on Succubus TF/Corruption is the changes to the ears, growth of the tail, fangs, hooves or wings. I kinda wish you had put some more emphasis on that, rather than mainly the dick growth and skin change.

But nevertheless, probably the hottest piece of Corruption/Succubus TF I've seen on this site and many places yet, do want more! 8D Now for the corrupted to corrupt others in turn, plz <3

Some canine/vampiric teeth would've been hot.
Posted on 27 September 2013, 04:50 by:   Mesh Faker    PM
Score +33
Very Good & Fantastic. Please, make a very fast second chapter of it. You are a very good Author & designer. waiting for second chapter. Don't make us wait for too long time, Please.
Posted on 10 January 2014, 22:49 by:   HairyBalls    PM
Score +12
@ xMLx I feel your pain. Some constructive feedback is always, ALWAYS welcome by TRUE artists, those that want to create something and better themselves - whether it's literature, drawing, animation, programming or even porn. As I'm a beginner at writing fanfiction, I can attest to that.

The last, colored pages look excellent. They are comic-worthy, not just porn-worthy. I like the style and coloring. In fact, thank you for finishing this comic. Bravo.

Tonight, I get my rocks off to this. Ta-ta!
Posted on 24 February 2014, 22:52 by:   KalaStorm    PM
Score +6
Excellent story I look forward to more
Posted on 28 June 2014, 21:11 by:   fakdap    PM
Score +2
Forgive me o Lord, but this thing is too damn good.
Posted on 26 October 2017, 19:20 by:   Dooka    PM
Score +7
This is honestly one of the best western Doujinshi i've ever seen, would love a sequel but will probably never happen =/
Posted on 19 February 2021, 16:17 by:   Asrdubale    PM
Score +1
to be continued .... absolutely!

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