The art could use some work...to say the least. Your friend has some potential, but if he doesn't get serious about his art, he's never going to realize it. This can be said about any art, but this needs SERIOUS work done if your friend hopes to find a fanbase. I mean, there's a fanbase for this type of stuff, but the art needs to be improved upon. Storytelling could have been done better as well, with maybe a bit of explanation for why the characters are doing what they're doing, and why. Thanks for the post, and tell his friend to keep working at it, as long as he has the drive to keep pushing forward, he'll definitely improve.