[Carn] Otome Gari + Otome Gari (Shin) [English] [QBtranslations]

Posted on 20 January 2013, 03:51 by: coNTRa69

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Posted on 20 January 2013, 04:06 by: Megaton

HOLY SHIT.

EPIC WIN ENDING.

The panel in the top right of the last page alone is Platinum.

Posted on 27 January 2013, 16:44 by: redrum

This is the kind of ending most people like to see in an NTR, retribution for perceived crimes.

And to the ones who claim the douchebags can now claim to be the victims and the MC is screwed? I'm not sure one the Japanese legal system and it's inner workings, but in the US, the MC has a clear case for an Extreme Emotional Distress defense, and at least the main bad guy can be up for Rape, Posession and Distribution charges (Since he did drug her in the beginning and having sex with a person who is unconscious does count as rape).

Plus, you have to think, with how people are talking on the last page, I doubt the douchebags will be able to get any sympathy or claim to be victims, and the MC will have public opinion on his side.

Posted on 21 January 2013, 03:16 by: Ico13

Finally the the boy man's ups an takes care of business. But is there another Chapter after this would like to she want the girl does next and see want the childhood friend guy story is like.And to those who say he did the wrong thing look at it this way . Police officer the rape my childhood friend in this very locker. She will soon give birth to a son of a bitch. Her parents will throw her out now she will have to quiet school and work and crushed my feelings so yes I beat some ass but who really did the wrong thing.It's what you can prove not what you know.

Posted on 20 January 2013, 04:29 by: sekirei07

My only regret is he didn't castrate them as well

Posted on 20 January 2013, 04:52 by: psicomenace

Awesome, finally is translated, that ending is probably the most interesting & amazing ending in the any NTR ever, pretty good doujinshi, personally I like a lot of NTRs but this one is my number 1 now.

Posted on 20 January 2013, 04:58 by: bakamann

Finally, an NTR manga where the boy doesn't cry like a whiny baby when someone takes away his candy.
He kicks ass to a freaking pulp... too bad he didn't kill them all!

Posted on 20 January 2013, 05:15 by: Omnilordxvi

it really is a treat to see someone pay in a carn ntr hmanga. All the men usually do is cry and use the tears as lube to jack off.

Posted on 20 January 2013, 05:29 by: DrKakashi

lmao
carn literally tired of his own shit

Posted on 20 January 2013, 05:32 by: Exsteverbur

Fuckin' STOMPED.

Posted on 20 January 2013, 06:03 by: Kyshatriya

Of alhe Carn NTR works, this one was one of my favorites, where boy destroys them, although it's too bad we haven't seen this trend in his newer works...l

Posted on 20 January 2013, 06:19 by: Dragonfire588

It would've been better if we got to see the epic ass kicking.

Posted on 20 January 2013, 06:34 by: Qtzctl

I forgot to see the author's name before opening this.

Posted on 20 January 2013, 07:18 by: Yalsin

NTR i think this just happens in manga not in our life
But I still like this manga lol

Posted on 20 January 2013, 07:46 by: zax2020

at last the heroin owned them for good.

Posted on 20 January 2013, 07:53 by: shamful7

This is the best ending ever, hands down this guy deserves a damn medal.

Posted on 21 January 2013, 02:45 by: EddaRobo

That last page works on so many levels. Is the character tired of telling this story? Or is it Carn? Maybe it's a commentary on the industry as a whole.

Posted on 23 May 2013, 22:32 by: Mann001

What a man, she wasn't even his girlfriend, just childhood friend, respect .

Posted on 20 January 2013, 10:59 by: san_dhy_88

The Boy also could be blamed. Just because assign at different class, he can drift apart with his childhood friend. Did he know that more than half of her life time grow up with him. How lonely the girl be left alone by him, I wonder.

Posted on 20 January 2013, 11:11 by: Wilson Mills 9

And another great NTR story by master Carn !
Thanks for the upload zzredwing !!

Damn, the ending is just sooo BADASS. At least this time, the guy did something, haha...

Posted on 20 January 2013, 12:23 by: lucie92

The best NTR ending ever, the guy should get a prize

Posted on 21 January 2013, 15:17 by: Palaxius

They got pussy and survived the assault, she got fucked plenty and will move on, he ruined his life and it wasn't really worth it. Can you really call it a good ending? It isn't.

Edda: the good guy, he probably has repeated that same story to the police.

Hezard: I disagree. He gained nothing from it, the girl didn't even see him as a love interest and she knew who she was getting involved with. He ruined his life to do some cheap ass whiteknighting. Also please, don't make baseless assumptions.

Kyonko: this released before NNN and it still starts with drugs.

Posted on 20 January 2013, 14:42 by: Dace Vigilance

Sweet justice.

Posted on 20 January 2013, 16:22 by: LeaFShrine

The ending is very good for NTR.

Posted on 20 January 2013, 16:55 by: badmana

It was kinda awesome that the male character kicked their asses, and this is a 'good' ending at first glance.

But the guy says he was just classmates with her, probably had a crush on her but they were never really that close. She liked the asshole/senpai in this story, and he just treated her like shit and then pimped her to his friends. So the guy kicked their asses and is going to prison/juvie for a girl who has no self worth and who was only a friend who drifted apart from him a while ago.

And it sucks even more because even after what happened the asshole still lives, so the girl is probably going to return to him anyway.

The last page sounds like either a statement to police officers or a farewell to the girl from the 'main' character. I give Carn props though because of the very different and 'satisfying' ending.

I know this is just porn but NTR gets me going somehow

Posted on 20 January 2013, 19:33 by: gazgamentulus

Yes, it's indeed an excellent NTR ending.
Not only the ntr'd MC does cry and suffer but also chimps out like a retard and beats the "offenders". And his hurt feelings will not be enough to excuse him from a long jail sentence.
A perfect NTR ending, the MC ruins his life and his parents life, the girl ruins her life and will probably go back to the asshole/s, and the asshole is legally a victim of a grave and violent crime, not a villain. More so, he'll/they'll probably end up with a huge sum of money from MC 's parents as an indemnization for the actions of their retard son.
Carn surpasses himself and craps all over the masses of hurt-feelings-anti-ntr whiners who actually think this is a good ending, and does so with style.
Fucking women disregarding what some jealous kid might think is not a crime, beating several people to half death is.

Posted on 21 January 2013, 01:54 by: killigraphy

All the people one here screaming "hooray for the ending" are retarded and or need to get over the fact that they got cheated on IRL...the ending is too far fetched, one dude kicks the ass of an entire group of older guys? who I'm sure had some amount of weapons. I mean we can go with the excuse of "the kid is jet li" but it asks too much from the reader.

Having just that one dude die would've been more thematic, but instead it ends on a sour note, the kid is either arrested, or getting his ass kicked later, while she's still getting gorilla fucked by said group. It felt like Carn just did this for the white knight readers, which makes it feel like a service to the buttmonkeys...when we all know life is much more indifferent.

Posted on 21 January 2013, 06:30 by: blood racer

oh snap someone did it before me "killigraphy" but basically you guys are just thinking about the ending and yeah I think that's the character talking about the ending and maybe that part about "we know what happens afterwards" is basically what is meant to be after the fight? shoot since she is under his little hand now she will probably just hate her childhood friend who will be sent to jail now and she'll still be with that guy so yeah just saying and thanks for the upload

Posted on 21 January 2013, 10:46 by: Kyonko802

Holy shit, did Carn just pull a fast one on us?

And here I was thinking that NTR was getting boring and repetitive.

Posted on 21 January 2013, 17:23 by: penislord

You know hentai has officially jumped the shark when a doujin begins with the line, "fuck me, nothing but ugly bitches here today."

Posted on 21 January 2013, 19:47 by: kakolukio

Whats with the look in the end i just don't get it

Posted on 22 January 2013, 07:54 by: loyal viewer

fucking win
best ending i have seen in months

Posted on 22 January 2013, 14:16 by: Ryuu_Style

FINALLY, JUSTICE !!!
All respect to Sakamoto !

Posted on 22 January 2013, 14:29 by: daythi

this ending make the story end, no more chapter, haizz

Posted on 22 January 2013, 15:25 by: sevenao

Hehehe..i think this girl is weird man.How can she think that guy will responsible to her if you look from the appearance like he will never get a job at all and can he give her house,food or anything else if she live together with him.Very funny....

Posted on 02 February 2013, 04:41 by: JuggaloHomie

Excellent ending, wonder if the narrative on the last page is Carn's own thoughts on his ntr work in general?

And to all u douchebags complaining about the ending, its a HENTAI manga people, not real life. Philosophical connotations to a generally unreal scenario are not needed for this and in the end, the purpose of this work as most hentai manga is to give the reader a boner, fap to it, then move on, its supposed to be PORN. Leave the heavy thinking and reflecting to the manga series with an actual ongoing plot.

Posted on 13 February 2013, 04:31 by: Eureka7

fking epic ending. Always wished the male to stand up take care of business. wished for something like this for crossing man x woman by kouchaya.

Posted on 14 February 2013, 02:45 by: cam155

My fucking face at the end of this. D: :D

Posted on 23 October 2014, 19:25 by: arnieboya

of course he did it for himself and for all of you saying he just ruined his own life well yeah, it's spelled pretty clearly in the end. no regrets though and from now on he'll become the baddest motherfucker around (my one true headcanon)

Posted on 15 December 2015, 03:54 by: holy_demon

Man, I wonder why jap education doesn't teach girls to go directly to the police when they just got date raped to get the blood and semen sample. Given that she's also underaged, that's either a very long jail time for the rapists, and/or a very large settlement money.

In hindsight, NTR actually promote feminism in the long run. Unlike pure rape stories that only hurt women, NTR makes both men and women paranoid and scared. And these same people will support whatever excessive punishment feminism lobbies to protect themselves. Heck, I'm not exactly pro-feminism, but I'm thankful to feminism for protecting women against shitty scenario like this.

Don't say this is just fiction. Fiction has a very long history of shaping up human's behavior and progress. Just look at the Bible, the most influential fiction since ancient time.

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Posted on 01 July 2016, 16:57 by: ayami123

Needs a sequel :D

the girl love the asshole, then his boyfriend just let her be rape by his other friend,

thus the childhood friend got very angry,

i believe there's no NTR involved here just pure blackmail and prostitution

Posted on 29 June 2017, 20:02 by: HornyTiger

MC beat them and all but the girl was full on in love with the bastard and didn't care about MC at all.

Posted on 04 October 2018, 22:08 by: Forgunia

Great ending.

Posted on 14 July 2019, 10:17 by: jamrock1876

So the girl got what she wanted which was to basically be a slut for the guy that fucked her brains out, the guy that she didn't care for feels a way and beats everyone up involved and goes to prison and this is a good ending? Maybe for the whiteknights out there tired of the usual ntr story of the cuck running away after being told that nobody wants a weak cuck as a boyfriend, lol.

Btw

I find it way more concerning how some of you would resort to violence on the girl for wanting to be a slut than concerning what the guy did to her which seemed to be a mutually beneficial relationship, it's not like she strung the cuck along and wasted his time being a slut behind his back and even so why not just move on instead of resorting to violence? Thank God for the police lol.

Posted on 23 August 2019, 03:58 by: Luiz GAH

Damn! NTR without a cuck is pretty fucking good

Posted on 13 November 2019, 10:37 by: SyriasX

I can clearly see that now a bunch of NTR fans are but hurt about this ending were their precious bulls actually get repercussions. of course the MC got his life ruined this is NTR the only time the police or legal system exist is to put down the MC i mean just think about the legality surrounding trying to record a cheating ex and you'll easily understand. the point isnt to get a happy go lucky rose colored ending the point is to put these bulls down or in their place and as the saying goes "if it bleeds you can kill it", do you really think after dozens of people who know the rumors see them carted off after fighting ONE guy they could, after months of recovery, just go back to their regular shtick. the waters they used to dominate might just be piranha infested now and thats not even to say they'll actually recover fully as we don't know how hurt they are.

TL:DR don't get your dick in a twist its NTR its not a happy ending its a satisfying ending for those that want the MC to do something and the fact that this is when you start criticizing the stories logic goes to show what you really care about

Posted on 16 October 2020, 18:38 by: Cure

As amazing as that last page was... it's kinda goes against the emotional and thematic goals of NTR.
Now don't get me wrong I tend to dislike NTR as much as the next (reasonably) well balanced, non (mostly) degenerate but I do also realise that the people who like NTR tend to be sadists by nature, and a "justice" (as fleeting and superficial as this is) probably won't get them off.

Posted on 25 February 2021, 04:23 by: Illagher

Is there a tag for karma or something? I liked the ending here...

Posted on 23 November 2023, 05:21 by: fakeburst

This doesn't have to do anything with the dude having feelings toward the girl or not. Some guys are violating a girl (still a kid basically) in your community, so you gotta be a decent human and do something about it. Fighting them outright was not the best solution, but he had the balls to follow that thru and did the right thing.

If I heard such talk on campus, I would definitely got into the conflict too

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[Carn] Otome Gari + Otome Gari (Shin) [English] [QBtranslations]

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