It's pretty bad. The art, the jokes, the dialogue, the story(?), the furry, the fact that you classified this as a doujinshi. On the plus side, you forgot to add anything sexual, however, giving the context of the site you probably should have. You want to make an awful furry comic series, fine. But it should at least have some sexual nature or one of those autistic fetishes like vore or diaper wearing that furries are hot for for some reason. If you're making just a regular cartoon, upload it to Deviant Art or Fur Affinity. The galleries aren't a means for you get exposure to your terrible webcomics.