Another comic i like the monster girl encyclopedia art and books so I'd like to draw some based on them and my knowledge of mythical creatures
I'm gonna use bits and pieces of info from the MGE or go with it

Hi man, not a bad go, but I'd suggest, in future, using the text editor of whichever program you're using to draw in. Some of the writing is quite hard to read. Also, perhaps have a look at some comics/manga for inspiration on compositional layout (where the boxes go on the page). Also, I know you might be changing this up on purpose, but you stray fairly heavily from the MGEs canon. The Wurm is not a Dragon, she acts in a much more primal way and, the way she's described, wouldn't have the time, patience or desire to amass a hoard of gold. If a Wurm's husband was missing for a week, she'd use her ability to scent his spirit and make a bee line for him, trees, rock and castle walls be damned. Finally, the guy wearing a hoodie looks very anachronistic to me.

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Not bad all things considered.

Word of advice: if you're going to use a generic "pile of gold" background in almost all your pictures, trying drawing a full-sized, high quality/detailed/properly drawn "pile of gold" picture and then overlay everything else over it. It'll save you time and make the background look nicer.

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Actually seems rather decent, but there's still quite a bit to improve yourself on so keep at it! Don't get complacent on your potential, improve your drawing skill, reinforce your grammar (or find a good proofreader), yada dada dada...

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This looks like it has a lot of potential! The art style is a little... disappointing, but I am still looking forward to seeing more.
I'll submit this to my friend who has a monster girl tumblr, maybe it can get you some hits ^.^

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Art is garbage, looks like it was done in MS Paint.

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How come good artist never do any comics of this sort?

I mean this art is PAINFUL. It's yet another weeaboo who wants to draw animu but doesn't really know how to draw at all. The sort of consciousness that can look at this and say "Yeah that looks good, I'll post it online" is utterly ALIEN to me. I mean look at it, FUCKING LOOK AT IT! Look a the kawaii ~uguu~ faces, the beachball tits, the fat inconsistent linework. WHY DOES THIS LOOK APPEALING TO ANYONE?!

I consider this an insult to the wurm, artists, and monstergirls in general. Before you even think of continuing this shit, look at this with fresh eyes and ask yourself: "Is there a single thing about this comic that's worth showing to other people?"

@nehmyncolad, by that logic, Keeping up with the Kardashians and The Jersey Shore aren't garbage. Are you really prepared to make that statement?

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It is nice to see that you have improved. I await eagerly for its completion

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Absolutely horrid art aside, the story isn't that bad.

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Pursue your dreams of becoming the ultimate monstergirl artist!! We have faith in you!! Criticism both positive or negative is good but only if it constructive. The main problem for me is the wobbly line work. Perhaps in the future use the paths tool if you find it to your liking. Good luck in all your future endeavors. :)

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If at least one person likes what you did, it's surely not considered as 'garbage'.

@dashat, there are a lot of things even I consider 'nonsense', but again and again finding out that it hit the top of popularity (God knows how and why). You have right as this piece of work is not good enough to mention on equal ground as the encyclopedia, but there are guys liking it. In their point of view it's not 'garbage'.

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I think this is pretty cute, I look forward to its completion.

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Yes! Keep going! We need a story-driven monster girl comic.

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It's good but you made her too smart. the Article says Wurms aren't very bright.

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Although the art isn't the best I've seen, I do find the story line quite entertaining. If you ever give this comic a makeover, I would love to see it.

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i like it but the words are hard to read sometimes

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Well it's definitely something that I don't see everyday, but I'm anxious to see how this ends.

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