(C78) [Tololinco (Tololi)] Azunyan to Issho! | With Azunyan! (K-ON!) [English] {Fated Circle}

Wait, does the smegma have build up, or has smegma built up? She says on page 3 "First, I have to clean this smegma that has build up, huh...?" Whoever tlansrated it used the completely wrong verb tense for build, which shows their mastery of Engrish: they should have used "built", instead. Page 3: "We could have messed up the sheets if we do this on the bed..." Translator really needs to learn to use the correct verb tense, as it's impossible to have "messed up the sheets" (past tense) before you "do it on the bed" (present tense). Again, no thoughts are being cut short, so the ellipsis is wrong. Also, unless you're removing words out of the middle or end of a direct quotation, an ellipsis is not to be used; "...?" is just horrible grammar, and so is "...!". It's obvious that "Fated Circle" is, in fact, CGrascal, as neither one proofreads their machine translations, let alone have knowledge of what a Thesaurus is. Also, ellipses are used far too often where they should These people need some quality control, apparently. Also, the part with "I don't want to catch STD" is fucking stupid, as being filthy is not a contributing factor to catching an STI. Also, they clearly don't know that STD is an Acronym, and not a proper noun, because they should have said "I don't want to catch an STD.". It's the same as when you say "I went to the hospital": because "hospital" is not a proper noun, you cannot drop the article "the"; in other words, "I went to hospital" != correct.
And way too many other grammar fuckups for me to think about wasting my time pointing out. I think an "Engrish" tag should be created for works that could have been English if they didn't contain so many mistakes.
Also, why is Azusa calling the guy "Onii-chan" when it's documented fact that she has no siblings?

As for the comic itself, it's hotter than hell: 5/5. Translation: 2/5.

Posted on 30 December 2013, 04:41 by: Victor DoUrden

Don't think I have ever agreed with a comment on the net more than what tentacle-man61... we do need a engrish tag

Posted on 13 August 2018, 07:22 by: Hyoros

Big breast veto while the size is as big as her head.

Posted on 24 August 2020, 01:13 by: Arttie

Why is the f:big breast vetod???? Those are at least H CUP knockers. TF?

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language:	english translated
parody:	k-on
character:	azusa nakano
group:	tololinco
artist:	tololi
male:	big penis sole male
female:	bukkake cervix penetration impregnation lactation muscle nakadashi sister smell sole female twintails x-ray
mixed:	incest