First upload, directly drawn by me, and guess i really shows XD

things in the draft that arent good:
-the text. bad speech bubbles , text hard to read
-drawings, some incomplete things that werent important at the time
-the last page an intro and outro
- it needs inking i know
-UPDATE 9-11-
first, thanks, i never expected ppl to actually like my work
-i added some pages, as you will notice has been months since i drew this comic, and im pretty sure i will upload more
-due to time constraints i will at least some months before i started properly inking them

Very good, c'mon guys, for a draft this guy deserves more stars!

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An excellent future as an artist, I foresee.

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It's good. Hope to see more of this or from you.

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story please!

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