Nothing new just reorder

You may want to take a look at this: https://e-hentai.org/g/274869/052c6b9d43/
Expecially about fonts and centering text.

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Great story, greater artist, but sadly the presentation of the translation distracts from it.

If you had an editor to edit every single sentence of the script & also do the cleaning/typesetting, this would be a lot better. Maybe ask someone you know?

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whats the deal with "CoCK"-i mean,do you live in some country where its forbidden to say cock without censoring it?Why even put censoring on a hentai site?!

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new torrent plz

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Translation is fine, the editing sucks.

Kinda ridiculous how the translator tries to scare us. There are more than enough translators, you think you're special?
It's definitely nice that you are translating this, but you should be able to accept constructive criticism and should strive for improving your work! There are enough tutorial pages for that on the net.
That's my opinion as another translator.

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Is it me or does anyone else imagine them all speaking with a russian accent whenever you see the botched english.

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I'm intended to finish this whole story, this manga is very weLl constructed that it even brings emotional effect. If your feel angry at ntr that means this is a successful manga. The major problem is I gotta work in saturday in order to survive, sigh, this is real life, translation is gona eat up all my rest time

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so.... does it have a part 3 ??????

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I love Engrish!

Can't wait for part 3 with more Engrish translation. Woot!

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Oh, you have the ability to evaporate bullets and manipulate human will? You poor, poor, woman. Life must be hard on you.

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Where the rest of CH.4 translations ?

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@shou0630 I'm a loner translator too. I kinda understand your hate, but, if its for fun, I think its very delightful to edit something to be really beautiful. I like when I see my finished project fine(IMO). Good luck with your projects. I can't argue, probably if wasn't your english releases, I wouldn't have nothing to translate, being paid or not. So, thanks.

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Would surprise me if the translator decided to pick the project back just because of the 'good' ending, after all the shit that happened. I also am kinda impressed at what the people consider a 'good ending'.

shou: what you said about rage is not true, I can also absolutely tell that you revised your decision based on the readers' outrage because of you stopping the project, as you went from

'Lol this is some extreme ntr shit. Especially when first two chapters start out sweet. Just look at that, fucked under the boy's eyes,and the boy keeps saying yamede,how does that make you feel. What's so extreme is that in the end asami erased her from his. Memory, the last page...
I'm droppin the project,if some1 likes ntr plz continue'

In the raw gallery to the 'asskissing' in this one. I'm sorry for being blunt but that is how it looks to me.

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Hora Hora <3

Base +7, 151132 +8

Why NTR? Oo

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I love how the translation on page 7 is almost perfect.

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If you're translating into another language, why leave common words in their original language? I can understand tricky expressions that don't translate smoothly, but I'm pretty sure things like "yamete" and "yameiro" have straightforward English equivalents. That being said, I'm happy to see this being continued.

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......the last page og chap.5 is not translated :(
Come on really, why the hell translating "all" leaving the last page like that?

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for fuck sakes this is hentai manga, why censor Pussy and Cock, does translator worry about kids reading pornographic material and learn to curse? what are you inbred?

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Well, some of you should be ashamed. Yes, It is true, this is not very good translated or edited, and you can remark that. In fact, It should be remarked, so as to encourage the translator to do it better next time.

But constructive criticism and encouragement are quite far one from another. And maybe It makes you feel better to mock a guy, but, in the long term, the only you are doing is make that guy lose the will to translate any more doujinshi.

So, to shou0630, thanks for translating It, and I encourage you to try to improve for the next time.

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i need more !!!!!!!!!!!!

Base +2, homogenized -11, forvea -9

My advice is that you proofread. I've read papers by foreign students with less grammatical errors.

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It's really not complete. Hope someone can finish it.

Base +6

Best Netorare manga ever...realy! All i love! Hypnotize, rape, cheat in front of boyfriends! Omg this is so sick!!!!!1 II LOVE THIS! I M SICK! LOL

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Moree.. about asami who have sex on the street gangbang and double penetration once more, please update chapter 6 7 8 :D

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FALCON PUNCH? Seriously?

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last page is not translated

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LMAO!!! FALCON PUNCH!!!

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Ultimately, we still need a good translated edition!

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I can't say this is the best work I have seen but is not so bad, I mean it's a start.

Base +9

I hate it when a NTR series ended up with forced Happy Ending.....

why don't you learn a little from Carn or Nagare Ippon?

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And as usual another lousy edit with no RAWS. What's with ppl nowadays? Is it so difficult to upload raws as well as translated ones?

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Is this really complete?

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What a bunch of ungrateful little bastards. You should be lucky it's been done. Little crybabies with one hand on their cock and the other hand expecting a handout.

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Son'na!!!!!

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Half-assed translation is half-assed.

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Best translation since "just according to keikaku".

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This isn't complete yet. We need the first pages of takabon and the last chapter that come after this chapter 5. But this translation comes from magazines right? Too bad isn't from takabon. It would be way better. Great job anyway.

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Definitely gonna wait for a better editting job before I grab this one.

Base +7

Indeed, perhaps we ALL need as much fuck as our evil power.

Base +9

Is this Esper Mami (Doraemon) ?

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i love Oobanburumai style

Base +9

Can anyone tell me if this is NTR or Netori? My shitty net is terrible for streaming manga and I could survive by downloading with a download manager and booster, I just want to know if this is worth spending my hard waned hentai verse credits on

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why there isn't a chinese version

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Last page 181 is not translated

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Very late, but page 170, some chump used my patented move. Though in the name of justice, I demand retribution.

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Subpar translation, decent editing.

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