YES YES YES!!! Can't believe this is finally translated, can't wait for second part!!! thanks guys!!

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netorare incoming....

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don't get me wrong I appreciate the hell out of them but after all this time I kinda expected both chaps to be released at once....

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Thanks for your effort!

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It's a trick! It's NTR pretending to be Vanilla!

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This is not Incest, in the page 02, the guy said that his parents adopt the girl

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Sooooo...
I assume Side B is the chapter when he realizes that his sister is just getting slutty and dressing up because she's fucking his buddy?
I mean, it's pretty damn obvious that him popping in on her throughout this is her being 'trained' by the dude. She's not even a virgin when she fucks her step-brother.
Now, question is, does she get mind-broken by her 'trainer', wind up cutting it off and staying with her beloved bro, or innocently stick with her bro, while still being 'trained' the whole time?
BRING ON SIDE B!

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Ok for those people who want to be spoiled read the text below.

Basically its not complete NTR since in Side B the girl is still in love with her step-brother even though she is (as many people expected) fucking his best friend, because she is naive and stupid she takes his so called training as a way of making her step brother feel better during sex. Since the best friend can't seem to completely mind break her he settles by getting her pregnant, since no matter how much he fucks her she seems to love her step brother both emotionally and physically more than him. The best friend even invites the main character over in order to let him see the two of them fucking, however this does not let the step brother give up on the girl. In the end of side b the girl and her step-brother are married and she has just given birth, the two men seem to know that the baby belongs to the best friend but only the naive stupid girl seems to believe it belongs to her step-brother and talks about how the baby looks so much like him. All in all not a complete NTR more like cheating with a dose of stupidity on the girls part.

Seriously though the NTR authors have to come up with new scenarios since in every NTR work the girl is either mentally retarded or so weak willed she gives in instantly to blackmail or rape. While the MC is either a pussy or a dense fuck that he can't tell whats happening. Kinda sad when both vanilla and netorare have run out of original plots :(.

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best friend my ass just kill him and thats it.

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It's pretty easy these days to catch NTR before page 2. 99/100 times you have a woman who is portrayed as, well... mentally handicapped. A while ago that alone would have bothered me. Problem is, the only way it's possible to actually move an NTR plot forward is to use a mentally handicapped woman as the MC.

Obviously an NTR plot, since the 'oniichan' catches them fucking later and 'someone' is the father of the baby Yuuna has; based on the faces... It's Ken...To be honest I assumed that Ken was 'training' her right from the start, for his (Yuuna's brother's) birthday... Maybe not 'ntr' in that respect. But fuck...Either way, That sister deserves a dagger slipped into the base of her skull. Any woman who does that, really... And 'Ken', well, lets just drown guys like him in a vat of urine...

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Hah the best friend is a loser.He couldn't even mindbrake her with sex hahahahaha.She only thinks its training but its nothing more than rape to me. And in the end of side b they got married aand guess who's out ,The best fiend !!!! And what if the child is his he is still complete idiot .

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NTR, yeah, this should have been a very good NTR, your best friend fuck'd your non-bloodrelated sister, who is an excellent student - or excellent girlfriend, that should have been a fucking hard punch.

But one again, logic is also fuck'd, and i can not truly consider this a true NTR.

First, the girl, who is a smart student, actually too stupid. Come on guys, we would live in heaven now if there were girls who are so smart and so stupid at the same time, it is just like you see a hot, sexy, perfect girl in every aspect, tell her you want to help her get better at sex, and then she lets you do anything. That is just ridiculuous. Not to mention, this "Stupid girl" plot seems to be overused, and i am fucking bored.

Second, one again, the main char is stupid, the NTR is so obvious, but "I am so busy with my work that i dont give a fuck.", this is also overused. It is like she is fucking his friend right in front of him, but he just look at the watch and "Gosh, i am gonna late, gotta go, good night, guys." . Though, the truth is that some husbands might be very busy at work and their wives can cheat on them. But, this "Stupid main char" plot is truly overused and exaggerated.

Third, last, etc... "THE SUPER JERK", by "super", i mean "super power". Forget about the first part "stupid girl", the girl is supposed to be smart. Now, this is about "mind break" part, sure, there may be people lost their mind after being tortured in both mental or physical way. But this guy, just tell the girl that if she lets him fuck, she will be extraordinarily good at sex, and SHE BELIEVE IT. Well, congratulation master, you've just beaten the shit out of Itachi by Genjutsu alone. If he had a tape, drugs or some stupid cliche things like that, i should have passed it, though it is still stupid.

This is ridiculuous, but wait, this is hentai, so just fap. Well, may be, but it should be worth fapping. The drawing is good but not excellent. If only the story was better.

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Inb4: Chapter 2 is NTR. The girl is BEYOND retarded.

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Stupid Cow

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Can't wait 'til this netorare craze blows over.

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Hope someone will translate side B,wait it so long

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@falatajion

WOW, that was very well summarized. Tyvm for giving a good nice synopsis and opinion on this work. U my friend, get's a thumbs up!

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um this is very much ntr she even bares the child of the one she doesnt "love"

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is there anyone know where to find the third chapter of happy birthday?
cos iirc there are 3 chapter in total

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I could have sworn Side B was here in English, can't find it here anymore. And After is only here in Chinese I think.

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No trust me this 100% NTR, it doesn't look like full NTR until you hit the 3 chapter where basically the son starts fucking her and the guy watches in disgust and then the friends come back and starts fucking her and he goes into MC NTR mode where he jacks off to it why still looking sickly ad fuck and it basically ends like that

So could somebody translate or just tell me what happen in part 3 like I seen that he just went full on NTR victim mode where he starts to get turn on by it but I wonder what was said at the end

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need reseed pls ty

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Why hasn't the third chaoter, Happy Birthday After been translated yet and what's with the second chapter getting removed from the side?

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After reading side B I kind of feel sorry for the glasses guy. He really loves her.

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@Topfiy Son doesn't fuck her you moron, he only sucks her tits.

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