A doujinshi made for Zippi44, the author of Sign of affection, with Lucy and Natsu how protagonist.

Why did they censor BITCH but not FUCK?

Base +4, Kyouseika +5, Novanity +4

Maybe I don't appreciate the work it takes to make something. But why not finish something before releasing it.

As with so many other ongoing works I'm not holding my breath on this getting finished this year if at all. The art looks to be nice and if the writer has the creativity it could be great. But as it is now it's kind of just disappointing. Break the story into chapters if you don't want to write it all at once Mr. Zip.

Edit: My apologies to Miss Zippi. I will be sure to look out for her original stuff on DA then.

Base +6

First off, the person who uploaded this is probably not Zippi, and is therefore an idiot. Secondly, Zippi isn't a Mr. she's a she. The work is still ongoing, and can easily be seen on DEVIANTART... so why they bothered putting it here is beyond me. And lastly, don't blame Zippi, she wasn't the one putting it here, and while it does take her quite some time, she usually does end up completing a story like this in the long run... I think. Anyways...

Base +5, pupuchi +7, D u b b y +11, Novanity +4