Angela seduces the leader of the fighter's guild.

...Where the hell is the rest of their feet?

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The only way this could be any worse if each picture had a paragraph of text/story written in bold, bright yellow, all uppercase comic sans.

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Hameon shut the hell up, give helpful criticisms don't just say oh this sucks.
To the gallery creator
Your main problem is you are using way too many frames for one point. The amount of frames you have used for the seduction amounts to about 3 seconds of video.
Captions and creative writing of what they might say or describe what they do. are good ways to improve this. But the story itself we're using up so much bandwidth to get through one supposedly short part of this entire scenario.
What I finally suggest is keep at it. You took the time and decided to try and put something up for us and our "Entertainment" as I should say, you're better than anyone that might just blatantly say this sucks.
It's low quality, but can be easily improved if you wish to do another one even for a different scenario or try and continue with the (This story being about Angela etc.) be proud of one thing, you had the willpower and the freedom to do this. Many people don't ever care to do something like this or anything that might be related to erotic imagery or story.
Just keep at it. and try and ask around for helpful tips to improve your work, if you wish to.

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What? I don't think there's a single one of them with missing feet... what the hell are you talking about?

As for the quality or whether you like it or not, I care not. I made this for myself, anyone who happens to also like it can enjoy it, but if you don't please move on to something you actually do like and spare us all the rude comments.

Personally when I view these I do so as a slide-show so the story flows naturally and quickly. That's why I use so many frames with different angles, because I only view each individual image for a few seconds. These images are supposed to be taken as a whole, not individual images to appreciate on their own. Just a tip for those of you who might not "get it".

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