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[Kyokimute] Cider Showers (My Little Pony Friendship is Magic)

Western
Posted:2012-10-20 01:54
Parent:529064
Visible:Yes
Language:English  
File Size:27.86 MiB
Length:20 pages
Favorited:117 times
Rating:
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Average: 3.38

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Posted on 20 October 2012, 01:54 by:   diokyo    PM
Uploader Comment
A comic me and my wife are working on. She draws and I write, pitch ideas, pose....in other words she does all the work, lol. Will hopefully aim for a page every week or two along with random art work. This is the first comic she's done in almost a decade so please keep criticism constructive. Other than that enjoy and also just as a warning there are watersports in this comic so if that offends you dont read. Thanks.

Update 09-15-12 - Uploaded the 4th page, and just want to say thank you all for the support. I also have a furaffinity and inkbunny account under Kyokimute with Cider Showers as well as any random images I come up with. Just want to mention I have the comic almost complete in sketch form but still need to ink which I try to do after work each day. So pages should come out a little sooner than the week or two time frame I set for myself but don't hold me to it. Try to get pages done ASAP but me and the husband are team truckers with a truck thats almost always moving. So it takes time, but we have been enjoying every minute of it and really do appreciate your comments.

Update 09-19-12 - 3 pages added

Update 09-26-12 - 4 pages added, Have to say we put more work and time into these last few pages than probably all the other pages combined. Hope you guys enjoy!

Final Update 10-19-12 , Well, we had fun creating this comic!! I have good news, Wombcoon has offered his time to color this comic so check out his Inkbunny account to get the colored version of this comic as he produces it!!! Thank you for all your support!!!
Posted on 11 September 2012, 22:13 by:   mangapal20000    PM
Score +76
this can turn out good :D
Posted on 11 September 2012, 22:37 by:   Kang the conqueror    PM
Score +129
AJ's face on the last page:

Be careful what you wish for.
Posted on 11 September 2012, 22:45 by:   EvilScotsman12    PM
Score +88
I get the feeling Rainbow Dash will get her Cider but not in the form she's hoping. Golden shower alert
Posted on 13 September 2012, 06:49 by:   autum    PM
Score +16
Lookiing good so far. Well done.
Posted on 12 September 2012, 01:45 by:   Onisarius    PM
Score +113
I see where this is going and am totally into it.
Watching the progression on this.
Also you and your wife are making this? Way to keep the magic alive guys, good work.
Posted on 12 September 2012, 01:43 by:   Azuria    PM
Score +76
Gonna have to keep my eyes on thisone! :3
Posted on 12 September 2012, 14:36 by:   Kyou F    PM
Score +68
Either this will turn out as good as the best, or this will turn out as good as Cupcakes.
Posted on 20 October 2012, 03:23 by:   kuehnau    PM
Score -100
The art isn't very good, the drawings are just barely discernible from the actual franchise's characters. Further, is it me, or are the character's being drawling differently in almost every frame? It's like the artist didn't take the time to actually try to keep the style and drawings the same.

Don't even get me started on the other shit, weird, out of place perspectives, back grounds and details that don't match the rest of the art styles. At some times you'd think the ponies they are drawing are completely different characters.

Whoever drew it, has a long way to go. I hope you get aids before then.
Posted on 13 September 2012, 07:29 by:   0kami    PM
Score +69
I think the art here is pretty good. Lines are smooth, dialogue is nicely done, and so far we have a nice use of sweat and blush in the erotic lead-in moments in page 6.

Glad you can find a way to explore your creative steamy side together! Keep up the good work guys, looking forward to more!
Posted on 13 September 2012, 08:00 by:   Forgivins1n    PM
Score +12
Smells like piss.
Posted on 16 September 2012, 04:08 by:   thatguy26    PM
Score -64
It's gonna be piss you stupid fucking horse, how could you not get that with all the obvious as shit hints from the word go?
Posted on 16 September 2012, 05:33 by:   DanTxRAD    PM
Score -13
aaaaaawwwww shit!
here it comes!
Posted on 20 September 2012, 02:06 by:   Nerfless    PM
Score +17
It has to be said. I have the weirdest boner right now.... but I kinda like it.
Posted on 20 September 2012, 03:16 by:   hentaixt    PM
Score +66
Ok, speaking constructively... because I don't know where else to comment on this... The heads on page six need to be fixed. Everything else seems to remain in style throughout the pages, but that one needs some re-shaping. Other than that, can't wait for the pay-off!!
Posted on 26 September 2012, 04:29 by:   Jomamma64    PM
Score +5
Am I the only one thinking about R. Kelly?

keep it up!
Posted on 26 September 2012, 18:56 by:   Xianyu    PM
Score -5
Ugh...... uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuugh.

I love the art but drinking piss? uuuugh. Quick, I need a picture of Bear Grylls!

Art is awesome. Content is... not so much.
Posted on 27 September 2012, 06:43 by:   NecromancerX69    PM
Score +26
I want to congratulate both of you(mr and ms) for this pure awesomeness.
Please keep up the good work.

Yours truly. NecromancerX69

Ps. Hope that once you finish this story there will be more like this one.
Posted on 20 October 2012, 20:15 by:   Toxic -NO-    PM
Score +23
Dat "Taste the rainbow" got me
Posted on 21 October 2012, 17:01 by:   flamedra    PM
Score +9
j'adore se comics continuer votre travail et si possible coloré le tout.
Posted on 22 March 2014, 16:41 by:   takuyasha    PM
Score +9
I agree that your art needs more of a touch up, but judging by your new comic you have worked on it.

I would love to see more of these two with their little fetish. It's my favorite ship with my favorite fetish. This could never go wrong. Except with extremely bad MS paint.

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