This is a fan-edit. read the disclaimer in the first picture.

I think there are some pages missing (12 and 14)

too bad that this is not a real translation but still liked it though.

thanks helthrow

Base +9, jeren_sky +9

If you're going to rewrite something, at least use correct spelling and grammar. Good grief…

Base +10, Szayedt +9, omgrei +10, jeren_sky -9, no-name here +10, Hann0225 +7, lublife +6, Thefreeman9001 +6

Is fan-edit now a fancy way of saying rewrite?

Base +16, spr33 +11, Blopa +10, Gitami +12, omgrei +10, JukanX +18, Kiriax +11, no-name here +10, joseph_864 +6, Thefreeman9001 +6

thanks Siroun20, i do this stuff with the philosophy that, so long as one person enjoyed it, it was all worth while.

Base +7, jeren_sky +9

I really liked you job on this rewrite

Base +12

A decent enough rewrite. Grammar's a bit off, but I like that you took the effort to edit the expressions to fit the rewrite. Out of curiosity, is there a faithful translation out there? I'm kinda curious about the original.

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