Title: Homecoming
Artist: Yukiyoshi Mamizu
Source: Shinzui Summer Version Vol 2
Translated by: Monk-Gi

Description: A short story by Yukiyoshi Mamizu (Hito no Fundoshi) where a married couple visits the husband's father's home in the country.

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Inb4 rage and angry people bitching about Netorare. Still, this was as cliche as you can get. Seen one Netorare doujinshi, pretty much seen 'em ALL. Dopey moron who has hot girlfriend, wife, or some hot female friend, is an idiot and doesn't screw her enough. Or maybe he does, and she's just a whore. She goes out and fucks some plug ugly old guy, fat ass piece of crap, douche stud, or his family and acts the whore while he's a dumb ass man who can't figure out his girl is cheating on him.

There, I just spoiled the plot for all of you. You may now commence the rage and hatred against this thing.

Edit: Me? Hate? One of my favorite Trilogy of Doujinshi's is a Netorare trilogy. I'm just pointing out the plot points as I see them. Netorare is fine if you follow this simple law. DON'T make the guy whose stealing the girl from the other guy a massive douche. Sadly this law is hardly ever followed.

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@Luke78

"inb4 haters" doesn't work if you're a hater yourself.

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I in general would like to see less ntr haters, the hentai world is big enough that you can just enjoy your plain vanilla hentai and we can enjoy our ntr hentai.

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in this cliche stuff u rage, u lose.

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Holy crap a good rewrite?

These are few and far between.

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Finally, a translation of this! I have waited for so long. Anyway, I have absolutely nothing against 'netorare' in fictional works, some of these 'netorare' works can even have pretty interesting plots (e.g. works by Sanbun Kyoden). By the way, I like the fact that Yukiyoshi Mamizu also draw older woman/wife characters, besides the teen girls (e.g. like in his previous works about Princess Lover etc.).

Thanks for the share!

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I cannot wait to have my own son and bang his wife next to my sleeping grandchild.
It's guaranteed she'll get addicted to my cock as well, so it all works out!

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It's impressive how, by the composition of the first page alone, it screams Netorare. It shouldn't be obvious but, it is. The way we're presented in a hentai work, to both the male and female protagonists as well a secondary male character in the first page, the way the male protagonist is carelessly advancing ahead of the girl, the way he's dressed... damn, the more i look at it the more i think "this shouldn't be enough to guarantee a Netorare work, i bet there are non-netorares that begin in a similar fashion right?"... but then i opened the gallery and BANG, another netorare of course. Was it just an unfounded guess that happened to be right because the majority of uploads nowadays are indeed Netorare, or did anyone else get similar vibes from looking at the first page alone?

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Enjoy your mongoloid kids, girlfriend.

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As netorare stories usually go, this story is pretty on the light end IMO. The thing that mostly put me off is that the narration switches from the perspective of the grandpa to that of the wife halfway through.

As for the translation itself, I cross-checked the first dozen pages and to me it seems okay.

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Page 1:

SHE WILL FUCK THE OLD GUY!

...

motherfucking called it.

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I'm here for the art, who's with me?

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is there a volume 1 ?

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Page 13. Tied-up hands.

Notice anything unusual?

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Typical: Japanese male cares only about promotins and doesnt know how to control his hoe. Serves him right if she fucks with a foreigner/parent/animal/some magical mambo jumbo.

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Tried to read this but still makes me want to beat some grandpa ass. netorare is truly a amazingly fucked up genre it's absolutely horrible.

So pro-netorare bitches before you call me hater or whatever get a piece of paper write down your thoughts about my comment, put it in an envelope apply a stamp then fold it up and shove it up your ass THANK YOU

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Disgusting work. Netorare vanilla crap hentai is for nostalgic fans who experienced or will soon enough experience the same YES!!!

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Version on spanish here: http://netorarew.blogspot.com/2018/02/homecoming-espanol-regreso-casa.html

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nice nice art :v so exciting thanks for share

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Add Impregnation Tag.

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