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[Shiki Takuto] if - Tokei Monogatari | if - A Story About a Watch (Comic MUJIN 2012-07) [English] =LWB=

[史鬼匠人] if<時計物語> (COMIC MUJIN 2012年07月号) [英訳]

Manga
(Disowned)
Posted:2012-08-10 08:05
Parent:None
Visible:Yes
Language:English  TR
File Size:33.81 MiB
Length:52 pages
Favorited:3872 times
Rating:
800
Average: 4.79

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Posted on 10 August 2012, 08:05
Uploader Comment
TL: Red Vodka
ED: Dracolord

http://www.littlewhitebutterflies.net/
Posted on 10 August 2012, 08:52 by:   lord_xenu    PM
Score +781
AWWWW sweet rape!
Posted on 10 August 2012, 08:56 by:   plahplah    PM
Score +280
this was cute
Posted on 10 August 2012, 09:27 by:   shamful7    PM
Score +1481
I like this story it feels very original in the sense he doesn't stop but rewinds time. But imagine if the watch broke, hed be up shit creek without a paddle.
Posted on 10 August 2012, 10:01 by:   KTZ    PM
Score +442
Interesting story!
Posted on 10 August 2012, 11:45 by:   geshpenst    PM
Score +1115
ahh... if only life was an emulator with a save state... it'll all be easier...
Posted on 10 August 2012, 14:04 by:   Rah    PM
Score +332
Damn what an awesome story. Why is it that a sweet girl can always melt through a man's heart?
Posted on 10 August 2012, 15:18 by:   Lao Shan Long    PM
Score +1376
Quality literature often explores the nature of human existence, perception, and morality. It begs the reader to ask himself: Is this right? Is this what I would have done? Who are we? Does our society really rely on so many assumptions?

This is one of the few short comics I have read that really begins to send me down that path. Good show.
Posted on 10 August 2012, 16:34 by:   kalicrates    PM
Score +126
the hngggg level is too dam high!
Posted on 10 August 2012, 17:06 by:   blood racer    PM
Score -68
I woulda kept the watch although I woulda preferred to see a bunch of girls raped this works to nothing bad with a good ending thanks for the upload
Posted on 10 August 2012, 17:55 by:   Halls270    PM
Score +147
Its top panel looks like sad Keanu
Posted on 10 August 2012, 19:13 by:   joranger    PM
Score +125
So cute, what a sweet story!
Posted on 10 August 2012, 20:40 by:   POOT    PM
Score +51
it's been a while since we had a "Time" related story 5/5
Posted on 10 August 2012, 21:18 by:   creamlapine    PM
Score +48
Wow, i am surprised. An LWB comic that has a good ending to it. Well sort of anyway...
Posted on 10 August 2012, 21:45 by:   joseph joestar    PM
Score +234
TOKI WO TOMARE! ZA REIIIPUUUUUUU!

This is the kind of stuff Dio would have done if he wasn't a fag.
Posted on 10 August 2012, 21:57 by:   Hakrei    PM
Score +443
A typical time manipulation story I thought, but intertwined was a somewhat realistic and sweet story. Stories with deeper meanings are always good. Always heals the wounded heart...
Posted on 10 August 2012, 22:39 by:   Geneva    PM
Score +168
besides the rape, this is pretty standard vanilla.
Posted on 10 August 2012, 23:40 by:   Kanon007    PM
Score +90
I'll take that watch now.
Posted on 11 August 2012, 00:48 by:   ibuju    PM
Score +138
first it was like bitter lemon, then its suddenly become sweet sugar HNNGGGG >.<
Posted on 11 August 2012, 01:17 by:   Agroar    PM
Score +675
This really shows how a person would realistically act if they suddenly were given one hour to do anything without consequences. I know I would do some pretty illegal things if I could rewind time like this...and I know most people would also do that which they are to afraid of doing IRL. It's 1 hour without any consequences at all!!!

Yea he gets off on Rape...but the fact that it ends up never happening it's kind of the same as the people who enjoy seeing rape porno and reading rape hentai and so on. He's not all bad, it shows when he helped the homeless old man.
Posted on 11 August 2012, 03:48 by:   BossTheKid    PM
Score +101
This was beautiful...
Posted on 11 August 2012, 06:30 by:   shoesonfeet    PM
Score +106
Sad Keanu in my Japanese Hentai?!?
Posted on 11 August 2012, 14:01 by:   ipeka    PM
Score +5
he threw the watch because he fell in love ?? pathetic.
Posted on 12 August 2012, 15:11 by:   Fake Hero    PM
Score +45
I think this is rape done right..........and the art, DELICIOUS!
Posted on 12 August 2012, 23:08 by:   thefourkingdoms    PM
Score +79
I was hoping to see more scenarios where he would use the watch.
Posted on 15 August 2012, 02:31 by:   Enki17    PM
Score +47
Man even a jaded piece of shit like me got moved by this one.
Posted on 16 August 2012, 03:01 by:   5thelement    PM
Score +260
I loved this story. Here's a man who's probably a decent, yet very lonely person. He then finds a watch that lets him rewind time, and, with such unfathomable power in his hands, he is corrupted by it, raping women on whim, unbound by any sort of societal rules. This power would be enough for this man to attain virtually anything in life - he'll never experience any financial hardship or sexual frustration - he could live a life of pure hedonism if he so chose. Yet, after encountering this girl and falling in love with her, all of this power ceases to matter to him. He gives it all up with the one wish that he could change how he treated her and that she'd come back. And in the end, she does, and (hopefully) they both find true happiness.

One of my favorite hentai stories in a long time.
Posted on 21 August 2012, 23:49 by:   negative1    PM
Score +78
Full on rape into vanilla mode, 3deep5me.
Posted on 26 August 2012, 02:31 by:   naarcissus    PM
Score +33
Posted on 29 August 2012, 04:18 by:   psion300    PM
Score +101
This...this can't be possible. I actually read this for the story???
Posted on 17 September 2012, 12:06 by:   Sol671    PM
Score +35
Yeah... I can't fap to this lmao, the story is too damn good for me to fap to
I love/hate it when this happens to me .____.
Posted on 22 September 2012, 15:17 by:   falker36    PM
Score +61
"What can change the nature of a man?" - Ravel, Planetscape Torment

--

and here I was, just looking for something non-vanilla to fap
I'm not dissapointed one bit about what I've found tho, quite the contrary..

...outstanding story, concept and piece of art

a solid 10/10 for such short comic
Posted on 28 September 2012, 14:06 by:   Falcon II    PM
Score +69
Even easy mode has its hard parts.
Posted on 08 October 2012, 20:17 by:   tsobicily    PM
Score -80
stop seeking the meaning of life from a fapping material
Posted on 10 March 2013, 09:36 by:   DualGlint    PM
Score +89
I am a big fan of Skiki Takuto's work. The story, artwork, and the elements, are fresh, original, and exciting.

I really would love to see more of the if series, seeing many possible story arks dealing with time reverse or time stop.

This story is just absolutely original and great, like his/her other two if stories.

Moral of the story is very similar, but different. Even with time being a game if we had the power, is there still something about life that we treasure more, than the power of time itself? If so, what would we sacrifice? The power of time, or that treasure that make us human beings?

Our main character had everything he could hope for, an ability to play with time, do what he pleases, yet because of a certain circumstance, that power feels powerless. I also love that our main character isn't the typical anti-hero, villain, antagonist protagonist, as he is showing what we usually go through as human beings. Life sucks at times, we all had to go through it. For some, it may have been only for awhile. For others, it may be a life time. Like all humans, we all seek a form of power, whether small or large, good or evil. We are corrupted with power so easily, that it only takes one important event to realize how much power can cause you to lose your senses as a human. For our main character, the heroine's confession on her last rape, show him how much blinded he became because of the watch's power to reverse time. In his final act, he made choice over the power of time and the girl he is most likely in love, and made the right decision, as a human being. Even with power, you can not buy love, and hope. Also, he isn't that bad of a person to start with. He did show friendliness to the homeless man in the beginning of the story, helping him from not being assaulted by that teenage punk, and gave him the punk's money, while taking some for his self.

Our heroine may have suffered countless rape, but judging what she said at the final rape scene, she may have been in love with the main character during either the 3rd to the current rape, so it may have been possible that she still would of accepted him, regardless of what he did wrong. Whether that is the case or not, we will truly never know. The heroine doesn't feel all that powerful, yet you can feel that vibe that she has one power over the main character, love. She also had a harsh life, with her father almost raping her(and surly he would rape her if she ever went back home), causing a trauma to not wanting to go back. Even if she never knew she was being raped by the main character, she saw in the main character's expression, possibly a feeling of friendship, whether true or not, we will also never know. Even when she was being rape at the end, her trust to the main character was already strong, that she didn't cry, nor would she complain. She open the main character's eye that were corrupted with power, and that alone, is what makes the heroine so powerful. Very few hentai stories have a heroine who can overcome the main character's darkest doings.
Posted on 22 April 2013, 07:48 by:   Aliaga    PM
Score +34
Waaaay too deep for a hentai. But I loved it. I really, really enjoyed it. *sigh* I'm glad it got a happy ending, though. The second-to-the-last page had me worried it was going to end with him alone again. Bless that loli.
Posted on 29 June 2013, 23:21 by:   flashpanty    PM
Score +23
*last page, saw the watch in the trash bin*

( O _ O )

GIVE ME THAT WATCH !!!!!
Posted on 12 August 2013, 01:28 by:   contown    PM
Score +43
Holy shit, never expected something this touching with rape, schoolgirl, gag, and sex toys as tags. That last page made my heart hurt. In a good way.
Posted on 05 October 2013, 12:43 by:   战场原黑仪    PM
Score +5
Damn it!
This doujinshi is awesome!The girl is so cute!
老子还以为又是种马呢,果断纯爱了,好评!老子也好想捡loli!
Posted on 13 December 2013, 16:39 by:   PKLove23    PM
Score +22
A truly amazing story, the mangaka did an amazing job, showing the corruption of power, having a main male character who was not wholly good and not wholly evil at the same thing, a sweet but troubled female protagonist who redeems the MC though love and understanding, and a "tears of joy" inducing happy ending.
Posted on 17 May 2014, 01:48 by:   art17    PM
Score +13
this is a cute story
Posted on 25 January 2015, 22:22 by:   KumagawaM    PM
Score +62
>rapes a woman
>how dare you disrespect the homeless

Who is this guy?
Posted on 06 June 2015, 00:48 by:   DCFulano    PM
Score +39
Even if this has a happy ending, I still feel this depressing
Posted on 07 September 2015, 00:38 by:   Fronzel    PM
Score +2
Eh, I think it's just a more convoluted take on the "rape leads to love" cliche that has never been good.

Also, never using the watch the win the lottery? Not a bright man.
Posted on 24 September 2015, 05:40 by:   Brutalyte616    PM
Score +23
I'll say this is great on all points, though I have to question why he didn't keep the watch.

Sure it caused him to become quite the scumbag for a while and him throwing it away shows that he wants to move on and live a normal life, but ultimately the things he did were on him; not the watch. There's also the matter of whether or not someone will find the watch and abuse its power like he did.

Better it be in the hands of someone who doesn't have any desire to use it anymore than the hands of a criminal who may not be so redeemable.
Posted on 30 March 2016, 21:59 by:   Xerodusk    PM
Score +58
Alright, let me break down the current tags in the female namespace, from highest voted to lowest...

rape: obviously, yeah, this one is should be there.
defloration: hell yeah.
schoolgirl uniform: not a single one of these appears anywhere in the gallery. The girl in the beginning was wearing typical office lady attire, and the girl in the rest never wore anything like that at any point.
small breasts: cannot apply together with "lolicon" at the same time, as per the tagging rules, so one of them obviously needs to go.
gag: in 1 panel. Presence Rule, yo.
sex toys: 2 panels (within the same page, but 2 panels). Working our way up in those that still fail the Presence Rule hard, aren't we?
bondage: 3 panels. At this rate, I think the only reason "shibari" wasn't tagged as well is that it would've broken the trend.
blowjob: 1 panel. -- at least until this did it anyway.
lolicon: see "small breasts" note. Although I personally vote for this one.
nakadashi & x-ray: I added these myself just now. How tags this obvious were missed for this long is beyond me.
unusual pupils: 1 panel, and it isn't even a sex-related panel.

So let's do the math here.
For tags in the female namespace (the only one that contains any fetish tags) that were already correctly applied before I started tagging, the ratio to total tags is a whopping 3:12.
If that isn't enough to break your faith in the tagging system, I don't know what is.
Posted on 05 January 2019, 14:12 by:   lolgay3    PM
Score +6
> are you frustrated?

Is this for real? It said that in the original text?

Also, has anyone else noticed how short the girl's legs are? The entire bottom half of her body isn't even as long as her torso. This artist's anatomical proportions are whacked.
Last edited on 06 April 2020, 17:55.
Posted on 04 May 2020, 01:12 by:   HabaneroJim    PM
Score +38
Great story but man you have to be a fucking moron to ever consider throwing away a time manipulating watch.
Posted on 18 June 2021, 17:38 by:   Loki The Flameshield    PM
Score +13
I feel like if you are going to get rid of that watch, you should do more than just dump it in the trash. That shit is dangerous.
Posted on 11 May 2022, 07:16 by:   MirLatte    PM
Score +12
This is one of my all time favorites, wtf it's already 10 years old

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