I took it upon myself to correct the plethora of mistakes I found in the other English translation.

Enjoy, and PLEASE let me know if anything needs fixing.

SECOND PART PLS!

Base +7, Lao Shan Long +6, Zero225 +8

If you aren't actually a translator, don't try correcting it IMHO. You already have an inaccurate edit on the first page. He doesn't say he was going to transfer bodies with the girl he was raping -- he was planning to commit a lot of crimes in that body, then find another man to switch with. The context of this is made clear a few pages later when he comments on how he had originally planned to find a "Ladykiller" to switch with.

I'll clean up the TL and editing in the next week, just sit tight.

Base +2, Lao Shan Long +6, silent7 +15

Thanks for the feedback, Maea. That was a careless mistake on my part, as I understood that part of the plot quite well. If you want to clean it up feel free and I'll remove this one.

I just figured it took so long to get a translation out in the first place that I'd do what I could to clean it up to prevent further waiting for others.

Base +5, rickstrongo +6