comic by darkeralan http://www.furaffinity.net/user/darkeralan/

this is basted in a roll playing world, darkeralan made a slime
sexy,

Wow. uhm... Just wow.
Dafuq did I just read? o.o;

Oddly hot, even though the art is a little... I don't know what the word I want to use is.
Good story with okay art.

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EAT HIM ALREADY!

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Your obvious artistic talent is rivaled only by your mastery of the English language.

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I'll give this three stars because it has potential. You have a good idea here, you just need to learn to write better, and practice your art more. If you keep practicing and improving, maybe one day you could redo this and give it the hotness it deserves! :)

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I agree with Invisibull Girl. while it doenst have what it takes yet it shows that you are going in the right direction. I am looking forward to more. :)

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