this is one of my 2 commissioned work in this week actually,someone transalted other one and mine is drop dead,but this one already translated when other version out,and i cant give up this one so i brought another version of this.

Commissioned by: me
Translated by: Madao
Edited by: Super Shanko

thansk again for both of them for doing it :)

edit note:added missing lines in 2 picture

Good to see another Dragons Crown piece being given the translated treatment. Thanks for sharing.

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Eh, thought the other translation was better, and this was 2 days after the first one, how do we know you didn't just take his and change the wording?

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really wow perfect keep going trolling,yes we take it and change the words now i am going take all those english translations and pay for translators for changing their words and upload here watch and see,other translation was shit btw,you dont know anytihng just trolling,always some numbskull out and make me crazy always

he can read what i write in all those comment section up ahead ,he just doing trolling,besides all my upload and commisions i dont need to give a proof to someone

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@Paisley: Because it was done by a genuine translator who i've worked with numerous times before. So unless he's getting lazy, it's a real translation. It's not unusual to have two different translations.

@Erranty: Let's just assume she speaks in a more proper, elegant manner.... Like Wonder Woman (I've never seen DC so I don't know her).

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This translation... feels a little mechanical. "Who are you guys and what are you planning to do with me?" That should've been shortened to "Who are you!? What's going on!?" It sounds like a more natural response.

People like things short and to the point. That way they can get on with looking at the actual porn. And having less words in the text means you can make it larger so its easier to see.

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Her pussy-fart is intense.

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Personally I prefer Amazon
Sorceress looks like she will have back problems in the future

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Why are people complaining about the translation? Just enjoy the damn story. And, imho, that was one of the most intense reads I've had. Amazon is the perfect meat-fuck, the ninth wonder of the world.

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why you guys cannot simply enjoy this

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sure one great piece of work and ass there

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Page 7 bottom center...Cattleya???

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