This is translated by me (sort-of) but it's not very good. Now this may not be the best translation but it's the most I can offer till someone is going to translate the other parts of this wonderful series.

Till then, enjoy!

Given how a lot of hentai/doujin artists think. . .picture 5 could actually happen. . .

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Even though your translation may be amateur by your own account, it's still quite good. Thank you.

Also, tissue vagina getting pregnant. Really, Japan?

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The tissue vagina bit is distracting.

Also, this chick reminds me of the girl from 'Scott Pilgrim'.

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Why rub onahole tits when you have breasts of your own..

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The translation is just fine buddy.

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She...really needs to find a girlfriend.

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Good job, great translation, hope you can translate the other works of this great artist

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