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[SLW (Q1)] Aidorei Elf Senki | Record of Slave Elf War (Record of Lodoss War) [English] [DarkSpooky] [Digital]

[SLW (究一)] 愛奴隷エルフ戦記 (ロードス島戦記) [英訳] [DL版]

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Posted:2011-11-14 06:25
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Language:English  TR
File Size:5.61 MiB
Length:30 pages
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Posted on 14 November 2011, 06:25 by:   DarkSpooky    PM
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Yori Tsuyoki Ai no Sekai... He(?) does lots of stuff, but nothing of it has been translated yet, it would seem? As I have a soft spot for his stuff - his Lodoss-related stuff, at least, I thought I should change that :)

The boring stuff: I'm no pro-translator, no pro at editing/working images in Paint and English isn't my first language, so if there's errors relating to any of these three issuses: sorry, but that's to be expected - I try to do my best though. Well, enjoy!
Posted on 14 November 2011, 07:14 by:   Red of EHCOVE    PM
Score +117
If you'd like to improve your releases, ask for proofreading help in our Cove of Translators, and switch from paint to the free but much more powerful GIMP.
Posted on 14 November 2011, 16:38 by:   Schroedinger    PM
Score +71
Fuck GIMP, pirate Photoshop. Available just about anywhere and incredibly powerful.

Get a nice set of fonts too, like the 'industrial standard' Wild Words, makes your stuff look better. Though that is certainly not a requirement as I despise Wild Words, done to death and stuff.

And +1 to the proofreading, just had a quick glance at your stuff and the English was fine in general (I see worse fuckups on releases by people with loads more 'experience'), but the translation itself was a bit literal in places.

Though that is a matter of experience, and certainly a bit of a problem at the beginning but in my experience you get the hang of that real quick if you're aware of the issue.

@Spooky: PS takes a bit to get into, sure, but once you wrap your head around how layer-based editing works, it all becomes easy. Wouldn't want to miss it anymore. I know Paint has improved a bit the last few versions, but it is still a dull knife, essentially. Any beginner can use PS for simple edits though - for example, typesetting itself is the easiest thing you can do in PS and is not any harder than in Paint. Once you get into the nitty-gritty stuff it gets a bit more complicated, but honestly... more often than not you can get by with a straight-forward, simple set of tools.
Posted on 14 November 2011, 13:50 by:   jenovasilver    PM
Score +72
Why the shit is Deelit's body so full of ERROR on pg 04? None of that is okay...
Posted on 14 November 2011, 16:06 by:   DarkSpooky    PM
Score +26
jenovasilver: Yori tsuyoki ai no sekai's early work often has the body porportions a bit wrong... He(?) has gotten better at it in recent years though, as you can see in the more recent CG coillections.

Red_Piotrus & Schroedinger: I suppose I should at least get soemthing else thna Paint, indeed... Though I confess, I'm not entirely sanguine about switching to a new one there - crude a tool as Paint may be, it's a program I've been getting used to. Learning how to handle a new program could prove fairly... Bothersome ^^;;;.
Posted on 14 November 2011, 18:51 by:   Mr. Dude    PM
Score +118
giant heads turn me off...
Posted on 20 May 2020, 01:55 by:   Max A Million    PM
Score +6
Hahahahah!

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