Ok, given the comments in the original post I know I'm risking to be burned. I tried to fix all English grammatical errors in the original translation. But I like Itaba Hiroshi's work to let this one pass. It's sad there isn't enough translations of it out there.

https://e-hentai.org/g/423167/457fca4dbd

Great improvement.Yes much better glad you fixed it.
This Story is awesome hard to find good rape without ntr no offense to people who like the genre.

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much appreciated. Now I can have a copy i'm proud to own. Really hope the story keeps getting tled bad English or not though.

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lol good work.Can't believe people is redoing the work,looks like you really like that manga just like me. I didn't start translating the 4th chapter, I hope you can continue to finish this great manga

Page 38 "Ah my semen, I'm releasing..." is wrong. This is said by Nishino when she's orgarism

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I got page 38 corrected. I'm indecisive about re-doing the torrent

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Nice attempt, still a little awkward though. Good job!

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It's an improvement, but still not a quality release. I'd suggest getting a proofreader with a mastery of the English language to help you.
Sometimes, you can't do everything by yourself. Just a piece of advice.

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I'm so tired of people mixing love with rape ... it's like mixing oranges with tree trunks -_-

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I wish more people would pay attention to older releases. If they were good before, they will still be good regardless of the date.

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"nice"

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