now it only needs a torrent. good job with the translation, that was pretty quick!

Base +10, Nemodark -6, Legacy91 -6, mythological +7, Long Hair Enjoyer -9, yuripe -21, Schroedinger -5, Sushilicious -28, Uchiha Madara 5 -17, The Noodles +6, Visadio -15, Rouge･ -30

Figured this was gonna happen, LWB's version is on editing, currently.

Base +12, Long Hair Enjoyer +9, yuripe +21, altereggo +13, FUKE +8, Sushilicious +28, Uchiha Madara 5 +17, Third_Aspect +1, Kudowafu +13

what is the text message say???????

Base +1, Schroedinger -5, Sushilicious +28, optika +8, Uchiha Madara 5 +17, akunoko -28

I know its good ntr when i can honestly say if i was that kid and I found out I would do unspeakable things to the manager. He would be praying to me for death but I already cut out his tongue so I wouldn't understand him.

Base +6, Schroedinger -5, Linkff +9, Sushilicious +28, Fearox +6, optika +8, Uchiha Madara 5 +17, Hobbitmon +21, fatjoe400 +8, Kanti-kunj +7, Ensei Sohryu +9, Moe Zayik +24, Omegavirus +8, and 24 more...

Yeah, might as well wait for LWB's version. This one has quite a few errors.

Base +5, Schroedinger +5, altereggo +13, Sushilicious +28, Uchiha Madara 5 +17, Jadia -8, SolidMetal -1, Kudowafu +13, akunoko -28

Good to fap to but damn every time I'm finished I feel so much rage that I can barely hold it ヽ(ｏ`皿′ｏ)ﾉ
I guess that means it's a good NTR "story"...Imma no look for some vanilla ｢(ﾟﾍﾟ)

Another annoying thing is that I like some preggers from time to time but the better ones are almost always NTR.

Base +1, SnareDrum +8, Uchiha Madara 5 +17, Hobbitmon +21, The Noodles -6, Gui Cogo +11, Toastkoro +9, Eldgrim +10, Foscom -6, JMV321 +5

great stuff very sexy http://www.naked-lindsey.com/?uid=1289260

Base +4, Uchiha Madara 5 +17, The Noodles +6, Gui Cogo -11, fogpet -6, mlkio -11, Valernos -10, BartSSJ -10, Sindril -7, amancalledtrane -6, annacanna -8, Vivi1993 -6, Visadio -15, and 2 more...

Carn probably saving his best story material for his own works, this plot is as stupid as Sae is in this doujin. "Senpai told me to give my best shot so I'll become a cumdumpster to pay off my debt"?. Yeaaah.

Base +6, Uchiha Madara 5 +17, blackjack11z +6, fatjoe400 +8, The Noodles -6, Gui Cogo +11, drackx -6, SixTri +8, Foscom -6, Vivi1993 +6, Ooe Kintarou +1, JMV321 +5, cochrane +18

http://www.mediafire.com/?qllbuzga2exwba3

Base +12

The translation is pretty bad..
But better than nothing!

Base +14, The Noodles +6, akunoko -28, MelmothTheWanderer +14

And... another artist to add to my avoid list..
might need to get mental help soon, the ntr is really
fucking with my opinion of people..

Base +6, mugglensu +7, drackx -6, Janice_Em -2, Paizurikin +8, kenabrxg +5, Foscom -6, Visadio -15, Rouge･ -30, JMV321 +5, Gtzgold -6, Le Faucheur +6, akunoko -28